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Postby petrafied » Jun 11th, '05, 11:53

This rhyme can't be faded
You sitting there wondering who the fuck made it
You try but you can't fake it
I don't rhyme just for the sake of it
and I don't give a shit what you make of it
Just pure skills raw and naked
The mic was a virgin till I raped it
Now you crying for protection
Who's gonna be the next mc dying in progression
One more and i'll be rhyming in the pro's section
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Postby B.A.D. » Jun 11th, '05, 17:46

U niggaz talk bullshit, U rap is pure wack shit
get off the mic now, Is my time to attack bitch
Of all ya'll niggaz battlin on here I couldn't see a Punch
U nuttin for me, In fact U niggaz is only my lunch
Preskool raps, weak attacks, easy drops
urse dont' rocks me, your whole verse sucks
Seems like u is determined to be the wackest fo the site
logg to spit magic and try to get a lil bit og light
Only Ax and Fordie seem to have sum hard hittin
This nigga petrafied can't fix-up, he is jus bad spittin
no wordplayin, Structure all fucked up, U seem confused
nigga leave rap shit to me, I'm leavin u like been abused
U is jus like a btich, only good for suckin dick and havin big tits
Respect my rap or look like u ridin my dick, don't spit shit
Iz Ax Dogg aka 30-3, So dirty dirty, said to be cruel
Ur only way is death, I'll leave u witouta breath, fool
Learn to rap then come back and fight me, go to shool
I graduated before I even completed the year, I rule
Let me murder you, Eat your bones, a complete disaster
If you waz the half of me, I wouldn't have to eat you bastard
But with a simple line I'll take you down like a clown
Don't clown around when you battle around, I'll leave u wounded
No way u can get itno the pro's section, no progression
u talk shit, I'll leave u like detention, so the n u'll be afraid to mention
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.................................ME

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Postby 4D » Jun 11th, '05, 22:15

Ax i can`t believe these bitches fuckin wit us,
All they`re wack rhymes bring my stomach ta bust
Fuckin disgustin faggits tryna bust one in us,
Without discussion they`ll be suckin the dust.
Truckin da bus, drunk, in this shit traffik,
Sick graphic, accidents when i git frantic.
Six attics of rhyme books bout my sick antics
Illmatic, slick classics on "spit magic" get manic.
Stick branches in a bitches ass, just for the hell of it.
leavin her ass so sore she wont wanna evva sit
Kick da bitch down the stairs of my cella pit
nuttin ta eat but water n bread n shit
Head is sick, i can`t be cured
Cut up all u campy whores
Readin all ur crap, might aswel just stamp me BORED!!
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Postby shadypelkey » Jun 13th, '05, 00:09

yo this is oxide flippin over ya rides
come on, roll over this ridge and die
fuckin kids your all too high
only way to write ur rhymes? must be, goodbye
only one way of gettin that high for me
is kickin your sorry asses over the great red sea
ha, I know your all jelous of me
and I know you all envy me, but I can see
what the future has instore for someone like me
makin cd's makin copys for millions too read
or maybe it's all a dream, I guess I'll see
globol warming causin your brains to fly high
sooner or later your bones will crush and fry
so as you collect this shit little by little
I'll be playin a fiddle waitin for your comeback riddles
oh and 30-3 last time I checked in the dictionary
school wasn't spelt like shool stupid foolish fairy
infamous right now shit is hairy, infestin your minds I'm scary
i'll have you placed in a infirmary, my germs causin irascibility
makin you feel like ur in a labyrinth, cockin on this 44, your havin it
click click boom! we through
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Postby 4D » Jun 14th, '05, 13:36

I don`t fiddle, See my middle finger, go swivel
ur level o skill`s so little, u get dropped like bowl skittles
No riddle more bafflin`than u bone brittle
Faggits tryna battle Me, blastin me is Blasphemy!
Hastle me ur cattle meat, cuttin u worse
Than letters when i severed the Alpha-beat,
Shit meant to say alphabet, but fuck it, lack regret
long as i`ve half a breath. TRshady should cast a net
over wack rappers faggit texts n delete `em,
`cos i`ll complete a whole fleet of rappers depletion when i see them.
Or worse have them graspin for freedom, trapped in my basement
reachin n screamin from under the pavement.
`cos when i`m trapped in tedium, that`s how my day`s spent.
Gay gents tortured with tools in the dark,
brutal n stark, that`s how my fuel is sparked.
Superman 4got to suit up n flew in as Clark,
Kicked his chest open n ripped the tubes from his heart,
Told him "die tonight" packed him fulla Kryptonite n dynamite.
Come in my crib at night when i`m tryna write an die on site,
`Cos i`ll be in a zone, workin`to make this Rap Game shit my own!
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Postby SoniK » Jun 16th, '05, 14:49

fordies a hilly billy, this wigger sucks ball thin
would probably shit himself if a blak boy confornted him
you a pussy boy, so feline i can even hear you purring
you spit such ignorant bullshit, u duno whats occuring
tryna be so intelligent, yet again you ignent
you a weak ass rapper, just a weak ass ligment
connected to nobodies, fucker suck a dick home boy
in your white hood they probably call you bone boy
and Fordie sounds like trailor trash to me
yo i trailer trash ur mums, herd fathers you got three
mother fucker suck a cock, till its red and sore
you aint ever been in the backside of no whore
you just sittin at ur pc, yeah u 'type' some gud rhymes
but i doubt your hilly billy flow is half of what's mine
Bubba Sparx, you aint Eminem...aggrivated like Vanilla
you aint scary, u as outdated as the mike jackson in thriller
you eminem cock suckers better go call up ya suburban KKK
and i'll turn ur pleasent crecent street into SLAY SLAY SLAY
you wanna cum tound UK, mother fuckers better be ready to PLAY
coz we don't take that hilly billy attitude down here, no say
you fuckers too intelligent for ur own good, you dun understand what you sayin
keep rhyming to earn the buks for the amount of prossies you payin
you almost as whack as 50 cuz niggaz sayin u supposed to die tonight
u aint illmatic, tell ur mama i aint interested in dykes
tell urself to stop with ur fake persona, you aint dun shit but lie
you aint capable of killing, u just a boy with computer and a mic
you aint in no studio, you aint got books of lines
you all poshed up bitch, you aint hooks and rhymes
you aint known how it is to b in a room fulla white people
chekin ur skin colour, coz you seem you not equal
you never no the pain darker colours suffer no matter ther wealth
so fuck ya whoe persona WIGGER, go chek YO SELF!
R.i.p big proof

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Postby PaddyMC » Jun 18th, '05, 22:33

Im tha bad boy paddy mc
u no me the big bad p
fuck wiv me il leav ya needin surgery
looking like a homo ermegerncy
from ya bitch i get blown
il jack your money like i needed a loan
better watch or next its ya fone
thinkin yall are slim shady?
just because ur mums a bit crazy
still its all gravy
she gives me what i need a lil bit.
when i touch her clit
she goes into a fit
just like u when i spit
take a seat and sit
you mite find out how not to be shit
or you mite realis u need to quit
yall prob beat me in a race
but in a fight i spray u with mace
so unless u want to be a hospital case
get going at a slow and steady pace
we all know ya mums suck a boner
no matter its owner
shes so fat she get picked up on SONAR

btw this was all on the spot, no jokes not like u fags who think it up for hours
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Postby SoniK » Jun 19th, '05, 17:03

lol man u gna rhyme lyk that, u can go fuck a dyke mutha fucker

dont u ever cum insultin us with ur throw away rhymes u piece of shit

i thought myn on the spot so sucka dick

i wasnt gona diss u till ur last comment


go suck a fat dick, u triple K gwanin cok sucker


lik em nuts blud


bombaclat fuk yo mum man
R.i.p big proof

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fuck you

Postby flaco24 » Jul 3rd, '05, 23:37

fuck you with your weakass ryhmes i have told you to many times tell your bitch to get of it fuck it let's get back to the subject, off the top of the head i'll fucking stab you with a disesed piece of led, yo you all are whack you should get back to playing with your mom's ass crack- I throw such a good flow I make your whole family stand in my front porch what's worst than me spittin this is that yo girl wants to get wit this muthafuck from the T you don't want to see me spit shit of the top of the dome i'll smack you with the chrome ive said it to many times to your mom stop it I don't want to bone....
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Postby SoniK » Jul 7th, '05, 17:47

flaco24/7 on crack....

ur rhymes weaker dan paraplegic
best this wigger beleive it
man just leave it
im the revolution, you seen it
i told so many, don't make you the next
u play dress up usin bras as a bullet proof vest
high cap wearin, british not givin a fuck
flaco suck a dick now, you outta luck
and ur mum got STDS, she infected
so i sty away from that shit defected
reflected disses in ur direction, you steal anuva flow
beat rhyme robber on the loose, giv me a go
ill eat u like a biscuit, man don't risk it
you retarded like TIMMY and this boy is gifted
keepin it real huh? real stupid, dumb, confused in the head
you the white boy who shoots up schools wit tha lead?
nah homie you just the white boy tryna be black
scared of darker faces, so you try to attack
American History X for ya ass, ghettos got you fucker locked
say the shit u sayin, find it's proper cocked
and i aint got no gat, and you aint neither
i tuk all ur oxygen wigger, take a breather
you weaker than ricket kids who need crutches
hold no grudges against me, you got urself in this situation
the hunch is
you jus not fit enough to ride the beat on this
yhou only fit enough to ride the treat on dicks
R.i.p big proof

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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 11th, '05, 14:59

My flows so tight
you woulda wished you
used them as a lock for your bike
when I stole 'em last night
got your little sister crying
cause she had a pic or your dead grandma
stored on her trike
sounds like a bitter ending
more like nothing cause this dudes pretending
man I was one setting those bombs
too bad I missed the train you were on
like it not but fag your all talk
don't even move to the sound hip hop
stay in your mom tucked up in a block
here I'll even gibe you some wine and some cheddar
cause anything blacks can do whites can do better
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Postby 4D » Aug 14th, '05, 01:26

The racist shit is fucked up!! I`m not responding to those last 2 rhymes.
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Postby shadypelkey » Aug 15th, '05, 01:50

man take it easy u fuckin soft mother fucker, it's all good
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Postby SoniK » Sep 22nd, '05, 22:20

yo mutha fuka, that white dude shadey pelkey....

Burn ya KKK ass down homeboy, how the fuck u like Eminem if you a racist u cock sucker....

ill burn ur fukin house down when ur mama sleeping
ur dads left right, beer drinking, grandma creepin
after i give u the anthrax, stik it up ur baby mamas nose bone
you a pinnochio white boy, man ur nose grown
don't try it with me, the only K i know is killer
and your three Ks just pussies in white sheets like vanilla
so ill spray my choco sauce,i aint black, i'm brown
and i'll bight thru ya skin like a new born hound
i never knew trailor parks featured ethernet connections
amongst your needles and mamaz pussy filled with infections
apologised to Fordie, i don't hate whites, i hate racists
you a fake, a phony, hypocryte like Mase it
stop playin wit ya own mind, tell ur mum beat the crack
or ill send ya dad over to cum back, beat her back
u need regulatin, and as i fly another plane into ur building
feel ya blood drippin from the ceilin
but nah, i just wish you luck, hope you see right, hope you see light
i don't want you to die, just want you to understand whats life
embrace it, face it, or otherwise you misplace it
and ill make sure your bitch pays for when you say it
it hurts me, it cursed me, white folks like you listen to George Bush
go to jail, get a manz dick in ya tush
coz you hiding behind a computer screen, you aint mean
you would never say this shit infront of my face, you runner bean

just for the record, my name is Kunaal, i live in North London, England, call me up on 0790431175902 and say it to my face mutha fuker.....in fact buy a plane ticket and bring ur hating ass down to my yard and i'll slap the dust outta ya peroxide loving face....

come battle me boy

oh yeah, also, your mums aid test came back...POsitiVE

american history X-rated like ur mums videos ryt?

pussy
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 22nd, '05, 22:26

yo fuck that fool man dont even think about it

nice verse man id love to see him try and cum back but you kno he aint gonna


we settin up a battle tournament, you in?
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