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Change - TWO Full verses + Hook - NEW!

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Re: Change - TWO Full verses + Hook - NEW!

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Apr 16th, '09, 04:56

i liked both verses, but more so the first. very creative. makes one visualize. worded nicely. all true. great stuff :y:
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