NEW SOLACE - The Truth [Finished]

[Solace]

Good stuff homie.Keep it up.

Thanks

@SajN, thanks, whatever i guess then your review still stands then. But yeah I changed the chorus, made it a full 16 (added 4 more lines) and fixed around flow issues. Also took out that "bend and shout" line cause that kind of sounds a little homo lol.

[Ice_Scarred]

^Wow thanks dudes. I'm guessing some brown pride in here

Wtf?

Well you, being Paki, him being Arab, me being Paki too.

I sense brown pride you dig


Anyways I've finished it. Added more lines and revised others and fixed that little homo line of mine.

YOUR PAKI? I NEVER KNEW!

Great piece cuz. Structure was dope, rhymes were there, meaning was there. Not your best drop, but a good one none the less. Keep flowin cuzz...

[Solace]

YOUR PAKI? I NEVER KNEW!

Great piece cuz. Structure was dope, rhymes were there, meaning was there. Not your best drop, but a good one none the less. Keep flowin cuzz...

I'm one third paki one third trini and one third canadian I guess.

Thanks dude

[Solace]

Damn thanks

I'm on a fucking roll.

[gutawafang]

I liked it man. Pretty emotional piece. Good as usual.

[Solace]

Thanks dude and welcome back!

[gutawafang]

Yeah thank you man!

[neversnooze]

it was good solace the first half has flow and delivery, while the second half fades away from the flow but delivery is still there. The chorus were "average" i think it would sount alot better if recorded

7/10

[Solace]

I don't see how its possible to have delivery in a written piece but okay...lol

Thanks for feeding dude