Writer's Block

[Brandon S]

Some dope shit right there bro, I've been struggling with writers block for almost 3 fuckin months now, it's depressing but I have a feeling i'm starting to come out of it

[Slim Zaddy]

it's dope no doubt James , but to be honest with you , i have seen your write much better than this ,, it's not your best , but still it's sick , i love the way it flowed and the vocab used , you got nice multies and wordplay ,, and what's makes it unique is the emotions ,, it's deep in emotions ,, good job man ,, glad you back ,, keeep it up bro ,,

[Arabian Shady]

that was a really good come back man, flow was insane, and as every 1 said, your emotion or what your goin through was laid through out the piece for every 1 to see, i'm facing a similar problem yo so this shit is like an example for me man, so mad props for the inspiration
Sick as measles B,lol
Peace

[4D]

When you come back, you come back hard. The emotion was outstanding, flow was on point, content was excellent (as usual) and lyrics in general were damn-well above average. The standard was definitely set high.

Good to have you back.

What he said!

Fuckin hell, and to think I was gonna post something about having writers block, now, I give up!

[DOPE]

that was fucking sick.

if im reading lyrics n i get bored off the first few lines i close the page, but when i read these, i kept reading them till the end

Great work.

[James R.]

thanks for the feed everyone.

@ tash- it's all good. i dont expect everyone to feel everything i've written

[Tash8]

thanks for the feed everyone.

@ tash- it's all good. i dont expect everyone to feel everything i've written

cool man, i'm glad you take my feed for what it is rather than bash it.. shows ur a true MC.

[Jay-19]

That right there was awesome James!

I could damn near touch the emotion put into it.
Like Maybe said, the content was excellent, and the rhymes were top notch most of the time, some lines stood out a little more than all the others.

But overall, amazing drop man!

[James R.]

cool man, i'm glad you take my feed for what it is rather than bash it.. shows ur a true MC.

Hahah thanks bro. Anyone who feels like everyone will or should feel everything they write is in for some rude awakenings. I prefer just acknowledging the facts lol.

That right there was awesome James!

I could damn near touch the emotion put into it.
Like Maybe said, the content was excellent, and the rhymes were top notch most of the time, some lines stood out a little more than all the others.

But overall, amazing drop man!

Thanks a lot Jay I appreciate the view and the feed man.

And thanks again to everyone who checked!

[SajN]

Wack

[James R.]

Naw you know what fuck you SajN you aint bout shit mufukka you gump azz moderatin azz mother fuckaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You know you love it

[SajN]

You know I loved it

[Tash8]

cool man, i'm glad you take my feed for what it is rather than bash it.. shows ur a true MC.

Hahah thanks bro. Anyone who feels like everyone will or should feel everything they write is in for some rude awakenings. I prefer just acknowledging the facts lol.

yea see the way i looked at this piece, similar to eminem... like all the skill in his new album was there all the rhymes and all the wordplay was there.. its just didn't have that spark that made it classic eminem, nad i kinda felt similar about this piece here.. it's just missing the james element imo.. but you're just coming out of writers block so maybe it's taking a bit to get to it which is fine, i'll make sure to check out your next piece and let you know how i feel.,.

[James R.]

Thanks man I appreciate it. And I know exactly what you mean.

[4D]

@ Tash, I see what you mean, about "The James Element". There's usually a bigger goal to the rhyme, a deep conscious rap or emotional story. I think James here though, was concentrating more on the wordplay and rhyme skills to brush off the cobwebs, which I appreciate. You definitely upped the rhyme skills on this one James. You usually have the multi's in your conscious raps too, but not as pronounced. This was show-off shit, right up my street.