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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 03:30

Spyder wrote:its workin :p

this was sick man, ripped up CW i love the rhymes as usual and vocab is top notch Anonymous shit.

testicles gasoline holder, my dick is a flamethrower
no wonder I smell scrambled eggs when I stick it in lovers GREAT :laughing:


no arms? I got 8 like I'm A.I.T we have somethng in comman :shifty:

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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 04:08

Coleon wrote:my favorite CW drop from you in a long time man :y:

10/10

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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Requiem » Aug 6th, '09, 04:35

F U C K I N ' D O P E
all i have to say. the first verse blew me away. i never expected that from you. i dont' even have to put quotations on my favorite part. :worship: man. great job.
verse 2 didn't come out as strong to me cuz i couldn't figure out the flow at all. but u brought it back towards the end of the verse.
and of course verse 3 is classical you. :y: SICK man. RECORD THIS
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 04:51

Ice Killa wrote:F U C K I N ' D O P E
all i have to say. the first verse blew me away. i never expected that from you. i dont' even have to put quotations on my favorite part. :worship: man. great job.
verse 2 didn't come out as strong to me cuz i couldn't figure out the flow at all. but u brought it back towards the end of the verse.
and of course verse 3 is classical you. :y: SICK man. RECORD THIS

Hell yeah bro :worship:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Emadyville » Aug 6th, '09, 05:30

MC Anonymous wrote:
Emadyville wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch


Yeah this shit stood out big time, I liked how you wrote this, it was similar to how you normally put together lines and rhymes but how you used your vocab was different which I liked, rhymes were real good, some parts seemed too random but overall this was highly enjoyable :y:

Haha yeah this is supposed to showcase my lyrical ability like Underground with Em. Diff is I'm using a wayne beat when I record it. *hint hint for something to come in a package.. :shifty:*


That's good to see you switching it up, I think this was needed, you always have great lyrical ability but sometimes, and I know I said this on some of your other writings, that it seems to always have the same shit in it or shit you say just different ways in the same song, but I wanna hear this I'm sure it'll be dope :y: :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby gutawafang » Aug 6th, '09, 06:43

Read few lines from the 2nd verse on MSN. :happy:

My fav line:I can care less, hit you in your bare chest, fair press
she a fruitcake, eat all of her paired breasts :worship:

That shit was BOMB man! :y: :y: :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Ice_Scarred » Aug 6th, '09, 06:44

Opening up a lot of tabs is really good for reading different raps in a certain time-frame. Now I have no clue how the hell you let out the material you do. Its like your from a different planet or something. Its like you spit out quanitities of work, but it rarely lacks the quality. Long piece here, but simply put...Captivating. Your style reminds me of a hybrid between Canibus and Big L...do they have any influence on your writing? I love the style.
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby gutawafang » Aug 6th, '09, 06:45

Ice_Scarred wrote:Opening up a lot of tabs is really good for reading different raps in a certain time-frame. Now I have no clue how the hell you let out the material you do. Its like your from a different planet or something. Its like you spit out quanitities of work, but it rarely lacks the quality. Long piece here, but simply put...Captivating. Your style reminds me of a hybrid between Canibus and Big L...do they have any influence on your writing? I love the style.

Canibus FTW! :worship:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 6th, '09, 09:31

Unbe-FUCKIN-levable!!!
first verse was ayte, but second and third verse bitch slapped the smallest amount of doubt in every1's head man..that was a lyrical orgasm dude, never felt any thing like that!! :p
but for real? i knew you were good ..never thought this good :worship:
Sick shit Mc, reading this peice makes me wana write someshit down :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 14:55

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: Thanks homies!!!
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