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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 3rd, '09, 18:55

SajN wrote:*adds one more thing*

And those who thinks they're the shit :n:
Amen.

*im still alive* oops :p
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Emadyville » Sep 3rd, '09, 19:31

I liked it, liked what you did with the hook and the whole not making sense thing, rhymes were good, some lines were real strong only a few were just alright, good diss :y:
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Wic Kid » Sep 3rd, '09, 20:15

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
Termin8er wrote:This is great, man. U can actually flow it by readin it first time. :y:

One question. Why u two beefin?


cheers man, i did think i flowed well on this. and er, when i made a james r diss, he hopped onto his dick and dissed me back for james. n it went back and forth from there really. but not nemore, i've killed him, safe to say that :shifty:


damn, thats some eminem-whitey ford-fred durst shit...
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 5th, '09, 00:52

Termin8er wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
Termin8er wrote:This is great, man. U can actually flow it by readin it first time. :y:

One question. Why u two beefin?


cheers man, i did think i flowed well on this. and er, when i made a james r diss, he hopped onto his dick and dissed me back for james. n it went back and forth from there really. but not nemore, i've killed him, safe to say that :shifty:


damn, thats some eminem-whitey ford-fred durst shit...

good point :y: lol
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 5th, '09, 01:04

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:hey, le T, we made mc anon quit online text battling :laughing:

hes dead R.I.P if he responds again,it must be his ghost :unsure:
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 5th, '09, 13:45

hmm the first verse had reali strong flow when it started, then it skinda slowed down, some punches were ayte, others were strong, lol chorus was smart, i understood what you did when i read it,lol
It was an average diss tho with a couple well placed punches :y:
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '09, 13:49

lamof ,, that's was a hard diss ,,,,,, some clever lines ,, out there ,, props man,,,,,,,, :smoking:
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 16th, '09, 19:02

Yo Scotty you can with the heat as usual and ripped it man nuff said.
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 16th, '09, 23:28

How many times do you have to claim to physically hurt someone in a diss?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 17th, '09, 05:36

Amadeo wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:How many times do you have to claim to physically hurt someone in a diss?

it's what rappers do in diss tracks.

it undermines the opponent's masculinity.


I know how people diss. But some creativity here would be nice. Just saying.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 17th, '09, 06:54

I'm not trying to diss your verse or anything, it's great.

But I'm just trying to state my general opinion of the forum, lol...

I think I should have beat you second time. :smoking:

Peer pressure?
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Re: murder of mc anonymous .. RIP

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 14:21

Hahahahahahah yeah rap battling is kinda hard without talking about harming someone at least a little but...
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
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