let me get some feedback

[Solace]

"Rasing like a fucken car"

Seems like he got annoyed, so I insulted him. Then I said I'd give it a 3/10 (Which is my honesty) and then he just acts like an idiot basing things for no reason. Bitching since 1995 doesnt mean I started writing in 95. It could if you looked at it in a different way, but he makes a random accusation so I just had to correct him. Then he avoids what I said, posts another verse, says "but im out for now cuz i got a life other than this site" which can mean he implied I don't have a life, and good luck with my "career"? I just like to correct people lol.

Damn, did I seriously write that much? Haha. Just clearing what my side of the story was

[Solace]

But I did do the time, I guess.



Cause I dont really mind if it happened or not, I've been out all day and I get home and I'm bored.

[Solace]

You know Solace is always a big smartass

[emzee-frenzy]

damn when i saw 20 somethin' posts i was like "maybe he wrote somethin' good", but shit you guys just fuckin' around , staten, i'ma be honest, your last drop that with "brutal honesty" was a bit better, but this is just not gonna go, you need to practice man, don't get it twisted, not trying to be a smart ass or act superior, just advice

[Fa-Q]

First off man spelling means everything here so plug your shit in Microword if you have it. Second your rhymes are extremely simple (no offense) run some multies if you rhyme black with wack cause dozens and dozens of people have rhymed that. Plus originality is everything in hip hop so don't talk about how its wack and how your going to save it cause every mafucker does that. Fourth (or fifth whatever fuckin number I'm on) don't give up and keep writing. You'll start to develop and keep everything you write. You'll go back ina year and see where your evolution has got you. Keep at it man and welcome to the forum. Oh and just accept criticism or don't post.

[Slim Zaddy]

damn when i saw 20 somethin' posts i was like "maybe he wrote somethin' good", but shit you guys just fuckin' around , staten, i'ma be honest, your last drop that with "brutal honesty" was a bit better, but this is just not gonna go, you need to practice man, don't get it twisted, not trying to be a smart ass or act superior, just advice

lol man , i just thought the same thing