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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 7th, '09, 05:32

I spit shit,hit kids with it,put tha shoe wher it fits


after this line, I decided to stop reading

I spit shit.... (you diss yourself)
hit kids with it.... (you hit a kid with a line in which you say you spit shit???.. .fail)
put a shoe wher it fits... (in a foot... and its spelled "Where".. not wher... lmao)

you suck too much to be true :n:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Xray » Sep 7th, '09, 05:39

Big Ax-D wrote:
I spit shit,hit kids with it,put tha shoe wher it fits


after this line, I decided to stop reading

I spit shit.... (you diss yourself)
hit kids with it.... (you hit a kid with a line in which you say you spit shit???.. .fail)
put a shoe wher it fits... (in a foot... and its spelled "Where".. not wher... lmao)

you suck too much to be true :n:

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Funny mafucker. :p
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 05:56

Mr.P wrote:Lol, I`m with you Coleon :b: Just because you seem like a nice person haha lol. So here`s a few lines for my man Coleon :b: :

Le Tunisian you come and go as you please, like herpes decease.
I don’t consider him and you equal, Em was the first, he is the sequel.
This isn’t right, like when I fucked a girl in the ass, and made her ride home on her bike.
You`re Tina, He`s Ike. You basically told him to suck your dick, what to say? That’s gay!
Your quote go: "I'd rather die like a man, than live like a coward", that can’t be so,
if that was true, your father would have never ejaculated you.


All in good fun :y: I just wanted to write something hehe :p

except for first 2 lines,it was really garbage,

ps: fuck you Big Axe D :flower:,and btw Shit didnt have the negative meaning, u retarded motherfukers :n:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 7th, '09, 07:36

well tuna, i actually liked this one, better multies and wordplay than the usual :y:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 08:03

emzee-frenzy wrote:well tuna, i actually liked this one, better multies and wordplay than the usual :y:

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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 7th, '09, 23:05

Coleon wrote:btw SET and THAT doesn't rhyme :y:

they do
Fuck THAT,
a clip SET
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 23:35

actually i gotta go with Col on this one dude they really dont :unsure:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby mcZu » Sep 7th, '09, 23:37

It is set and not sat. So no, they don't rhyme. Unless you slur the word w/ some strange accent.
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 00:36

lol u mean set is pronounced like sit? lol i didnt say clipset, i said i got my clip set
lol its like when u say i "set" something up :y: thats why i think it rhyme with that,and even if it dont,its all good cuz it wasnt in the end of line :y:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Spyder » Sep 8th, '09, 00:51

no man set rhymes with get, sit rhymes with fit, and sat rhymes with that

so u said set, which rhymes with get :y:
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Re: Oh Coleona ( Coleon diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 8th, '09, 03:36

np spyder^^it doesnt matter xD :flower:
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