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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:05

Older than a 14-year old kid. So how's being a freshman?
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:06

You got problems with seniors, just freestyle a diss verse to them. You say you got more creativity, so let's see you fuck wit the seniors. Send me a recording of the freestyle if you do it. Just scratch out the violent parts... I don't want to hear a fucktard get beat up.
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:10

Coleon wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:Older than a 14-year old kid. So how's being a freshman?


i'm 15 and a sophomore, why can't I know how old you are?

okay, atleast how long have you been rappin? I been at it for 9 months, less than a year


You've been at it for 9 months and this is where you're at?

You actually rap or just text verses; there's a huge fucking difference.

I'm almost 18. I don't know why the hell I picked this username, but it seemed right to pick something Eminem related on an Eminem forum, lol.

I haven't rapped very long... I just do it occasionally. Sometimes to YouTube instrumentals and I recently started battling like 2 weeks ago... Used to just listen.
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:27

Coleon wrote:I rap my verses all the time, that's how I deliberate if it has flow, I just don't have a mic

and 9 months is a pretty short time considerin a just won a tourney against people who I consider better than me

and i'm writin and pickin beats for my LP and EP atm

you have dropped what 50 collective bars on here and has received praise on a Tuneisen level

you're 4 years older than me, have been in the "game" longer, are doing less, receive less press, and bite NaS's style hardcore


Everyone raps it to see if it has flow.

9 months is very long. If you listen to a variety of rap, it's quick to pick up how to rhyme. With all these different influences, it shouldn't be hard to make a verse fast. I make a 4 bar verse within 5 mn of listening to an instrumental repeatedly. Who the hell takes 9 months to win a tourney?

I won Anon second battle... 2 days after I started to battle. No hate to Anon, but I'm just saying.

I don't gotta drop 50 collective bars on here if they're all whack. And who cares about Tuneisen criticism on this forum? You worship his criticism, don't you?

I'm 4 years older than you. I'm not in the "game"; I don't rap, fucktard. I do less than you, because I'm not another hopeful fucker who wants to be big and make cash like you. Who care about press if you don't want to be a rapper when you grow up?

So you're saying you want to be a rapper when you grow up? What kind of fucked up grades and extra-curricular shit do you got to be thinking of doing rap for a living? Only hood people do rap on the mainstream level AND get praise from the underground community. You want to be an MC? Get the fuck out of here. 14-year old white kid. Next Asher Roth, huh?

Being a good rapper is more than just lyrical skills and good beats on your albums. You need to have connections. Tell me you got connections in the industry. Besides your version of Jesus: Le Tuneisen...

And you still haven't fucking told me how I bit Nas? Perhaps you don't know... Just a thought.

When you finish your EP or whatever, I want to hear it. Don't disappoint me.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 02:44

So why do you care about press? Lol, you want to be a one-hit artist like Soulja Boy, right? Loser.

Even insulting me AGAIN on your signature. Lowest thing...
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 14th, '09, 03:07

da.relapse.lp wrote:So why do you care about press? Lol, you want to be a one-hit artist like Soulja Boy, right? Loser.

Even insulting me AGAIN on your signature. Lowest thing...

Only reason why you won against me was because my punchlines went over people's heads and I had hate vote against me. :y:
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 03:22

This is so ironic.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby gutawafang » Sep 14th, '09, 03:30

classthe_king wrote:This is so ironic.

Somehow I think so too. It's so sudden! :(
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:33

MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:So why do you care about press? Lol, you want to be a one-hit artist like Soulja Boy, right? Loser.

Even insulting me AGAIN on your signature. Lowest thing...

Only reason why you won against me was because my punchlines went over people's heads and I had hate vote against me. :y:


Are you kidding me? I got more haters on this fucking forum than you, dude.

if your punchlines aren't obvious, make them obvious...
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:34

You're the one who allowed "all comments."

I was like "no biased comments" but you disagreed. :n:
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:37

da.relapse.lp wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:So why do you care about press? Lol, you want to be a one-hit artist like Soulja Boy, right? Loser.

Even insulting me AGAIN on your signature. Lowest thing...

Only reason why you won against me was because my punchlines went over people's heads and I had hate vote against me. :y:


Are you kidding me? I got more haters on this fucking forum than you, dude.

if your punchlines aren't obvious, make them obvious...


People just voted for you because they wanted to see Anon lose.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:39

You're just jealous. You voted for me as well, fucker, lmao lmao.

If they wanted to see Anon lose, it couldv'e been anyone else.

Stop hating, dude. I could kill you lyrically. If you doubt me, let's go.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:43

Lol, you wann battle me so bad. Like you have to prove to someone over the internet your better then they are. Look at my drops in here, its pretty obvious I slaughter you lyrically.
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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 14th, '09, 04:44

I slaughter you multis, if you even read what I write.

I doubt it. You probably just browse through the first line and then add a hate comment.

I don't want to battle you so bad: just want to prove how weak you are.
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Spyder+Coleon+Class - Fuck Beef

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '09, 04:52

da.relapse.lp wrote:I slaughter you multis, if you even read what I write.

I doubt it. You probably just browse through the first line and then add a hate comment.

I don't want to battle you so bad: just want to prove how weak you are.


Lol i actually rapped this whole thing to the classic beat. Flow sounded like someone on the song but i couldnt figure out who :whistle:
And multis done mean anything, i have alot of multis but not to where it sucks and you arent saying anything important.

My style is bitten even if my multies are mildly written from the Nile to Britain.
Yeah that makes alot of sense.
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