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Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby AliJack » Sep 17th, '09, 01:09

Amazing Track :worship: :worship:
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 17th, '09, 01:10

Yeah, word.

One of my favorite Wu-Tang member plus a non Wu-Tang member collaborations.

And my favorite Biggie collaboration. BK's Finest is next. :b:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby AliJack » Sep 17th, '09, 01:12

da.relapse.lp wrote:Yeah, word.

One of my favorite Wu-Tang member plus a non Wu-Tang member collaborations.

And my favorite Biggie collaboration. BK's Finest is next. :b:

Hell yea
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Solace » Sep 17th, '09, 01:54

Spyder wrote:i recognize that hook :shifty:

You liar, it was obviously ONLY written for this. You know what I actually only wrote it today :shifty:

But on the real, no one has to know
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 17th, '09, 03:59

I think he was walking about the song "The What". Maybe. :confusion:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 17th, '09, 04:19

LMAO at THE AliJack!!! :8)

Solace, verse 1 reminds me so much of "Never Enough". And I meant it as a compliment because what you did here is about the same level of Eminem. I really really loved it man. Flows well, multis dope.
This is pretty simple but you pulled it off here well: "If this were weed smoking contest I'd be the only one blazing,". Nice verse man.

AliJack on 2nd verse. I honestly think you dope man. Lyrics were on point. I really really loved this line: "then son, I eat up competition like dim sum". And this too: "from the D X B, I'm an eMC,
fuck a square, i bet I'm fresher than the prince of Bel Air". Nice flow. Nice wordplay.

The only nice part about the chorus is this: "Fuck suicide,we already mastered The Art of Dying like Cashis." The chorus has good vocab man.

Overall, a fucking dope collab man. Nice one guys. :flower:
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Spyder » Sep 17th, '09, 17:43

Solace wrote:
Spyder wrote:i recognize that hook :shifty:

You liar, it was obviously ONLY written for this. You know what I actually only wrote it today :shifty:

But on the real, no one has to know


hahah o then my bad :shifty:
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 18:34

yo Solace man you did a nice peice man for real. Idk wat scotty was sayin he is from england so give him a break :P love ya scott naw man but I really really was able to flow with it. Same rhyme whole verse was nice. but really dig your flow guess it's alot like mine so it helps dope verse though

Alijack I always dig your stuff came with it pretty hard. Other people could flow better but I have a different flow yet I could still rock my head with it. All in all dope piece. Yeah bit too complex for a hook but other than that an on point colab keep it up
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby AliJack » Sep 17th, '09, 19:08

Yah-hah wrote:yo Solace man you did a nice peice man for real. Idk wat scotty was sayin he is from england so give him a break :P love ya scott naw man but I really really was able to flow with it. Same rhyme whole verse was nice. but really dig your flow guess it's alot like mine so it helps dope verse though

Alijack I always dig your stuff came with it pretty hard. Other people could flow better but I have a different flow yet I could still rock my head with it. All in all dope piece. Yeah bit too complex for a hook but other than that an on point colab keep it up

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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 20:13

AliJack wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:yo Solace man you did a nice peice man for real. Idk wat scotty was sayin he is from england so give him a break :P love ya scott naw man but I really really was able to flow with it. Same rhyme whole verse was nice. but really dig your flow guess it's alot like mine so it helps dope verse though

Alijack I always dig your stuff came with it pretty hard. Other people could flow better but I have a different flow yet I could still rock my head with it. All in all dope piece. Yeah bit too complex for a hook but other than that an on point colab keep it up

:laughing:


Hahahahaha just sayin I dig your stuff homie :P
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Solace » Sep 17th, '09, 21:23

Yah-hah wrote:
AliJack wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:yo Solace man you did a nice peice man for real. Idk wat scotty was sayin he is from england so give him a break :P love ya scott naw man but I really really was able to flow with it. Same rhyme whole verse was nice. but really dig your flow guess it's alot like mine so it helps dope verse though

Alijack I always dig your stuff came with it pretty hard. Other people could flow better but I have a different flow yet I could still rock my head with it. All in all dope piece. Yeah bit too complex for a hook but other than that an on point colab keep it up

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Hahahahaha just sayin I dig your stuff homie :P

Glad you liked mine.

And I think he was laughing cause you said always and this is the first time he dropped here
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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 21:26

Alijack I always dig your stuff came with it pretty hard. Other people could flow better but I have a different flow yet I could still rock my head with it. All in all dope piece. Yeah bit too complex for a hook but other than that an on point colab keep it up[/quote]
:laughing:[/quote]

Hahahahaha just sayin I dig your stuff homie :P[/quote]
Glad you liked mine.

And I think he was laughing cause you said always and this is the first time he dropped here[/quote]

Yeah I figured :P I was in a hurry cause I was about to be late for class. I was all running down the hallways :P hahahahahah my bad big homie. Nice drop for the first time though
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Don't Even Test Us (Feat. AliJack)

Postby AliJack » Sep 17th, '09, 23:01

Yah-hah wrote:

Yeah I figured :P I was in a hurry cause I was about to be late for class. I was all running down the hallways :P hahahahahah my bad big homie. Nice drop for the first time though

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Naa, i'm just fuckin around. Thanks man
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