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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 4th, '09, 21:08

embm wrote:
im a girl :happy: :blinking:


WOW um.....my bad :sweating: I'm so sorry I feel like an idiot :sweating:
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby embm » Nov 5th, '09, 01:41

Yah-hah wrote:
embm wrote:
im a girl :happy: :blinking:


WOW um.....my bad :sweating: I'm so sorry I feel like an idiot :sweating:


no worries its cool :flower:
we all make mistakes here & there
its human nature
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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby gutawafang » Nov 5th, '09, 01:55

I couldn't get some of the lines. I didn't understand them at all. On the other hand, most of the lines are dope and I could understand it.

I like the idea of a frozen clock. Nice concept man. :worship:
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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 5th, '09, 05:13

gutawafang wrote:I couldn't get some of the lines. I didn't understand them at all. On the other hand, most of the lines are dope and I could understand it.

I like the idea of a frozen clock. Nice concept man. :worship:


Thanks gutawa[b]fang[b] hahaha What lines are you talking about?
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby gutawafang » Nov 5th, '09, 05:19

Yah-hah wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I couldn't get some of the lines. I didn't understand them at all. On the other hand, most of the lines are dope and I could understand it.

I like the idea of a frozen clock. Nice concept man. :worship:


Thanks gutawa[b]fang[b] hahaha What lines are you talking about?

Well, the first few lines threw me off tbh. But I could understand most of it. So no problem. ;)
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Re: 11:12 on my frozen clock

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 5th, '09, 05:27

gutawafang wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I couldn't get some of the lines. I didn't understand them at all. On the other hand, most of the lines are dope and I could understand it.

I like the idea of a frozen clock. Nice concept man. :worship:


Thanks gutawa[b]fang[b] hahaha What lines are you talking about?

Well, the first few lines threw me off tbh. But I could understand most of it. So no problem. ;)


Ok yeah I actually came up with the concept after dopin some free write stuff so mighr explain why it might seem out of place :p
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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