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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 03:41

MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.

I agree with at the moment, fine. Just I kinda feel like people forgot about Anon :(
Also I didn't feed the piece cause' it's not my cup of tea.


Who forgot bout Anon??? Not Me :sweating:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby classthe_king » Oct 14th, '09, 03:42

Yah-hah wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.

I agree with at the moment, fine. Just I kinda feel like people forgot about Anon :(
Also I didn't feed the piece cause' it's not my cup of tea.


Who forgot bout Anon??? Not Me :sweating:

Kiss ass :shifty:
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 03:44

da.relapse.lp wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:At least give feedback to this guy. :y:

And I said, he's ruling it at the moment, unless you have the obligation to drop 2-3 times a day again. Yah-hah is currently dropping at least 2 a day so... if you want to "reclaim your throne", do the same.

I agree with at the moment, fine. Just I kinda feel like people forgot about Anon :(
Also I didn't feed the piece cause' it's not my cup of tea.


Does it feel that bad not to rule? :confusion:

Yes. :'( :(
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 03:47

hahahaha I'ma beat you up class :tounge2: naw just repsectin the brother :smoking:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Solace » Oct 15th, '09, 03:57

Yah-hah wrote:Solace-appreciate it homie. Been writing for awhile now. Basically since my sophmore year in high school. I'm a fresh in college now. Got a book coming, most these cats got a album comin but I got a book :p

So thats like 3 years writing? Damn. Good look with the book.
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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 06:59

Solace wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Solace-appreciate it homie. Been writing for awhile now. Basically since my sophmore year in high school. I'm a fresh in college now. Got a book coming, most these cats got a album comin but I got a book :p

So thats like 3 years writing? Damn. Good look with the book.


Ha appreciate it homie it's gettin there
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 15th, '09, 15:45

Yah-hah wrote:Little somethin I wrote for somebody real special

If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't weep,
When I have the brightest star shining smiling at me,
I don't need it's light to guide me through the night,
All I need is you there holding me tight,
If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't scream,
About this angel and her kisses I would silently dream,
So save me a spot deep under the covers,
When I can't sleep we can cease being eachother,
If the moon fell tonight I would write in the dark,
Through words I submit every part of my heart,
Invite you in, come and sleep in my soul,
So many hearts have been ripped apart but you're keeping mine whole,
If the moon fell tonight I would hold it in my hands,
Put it in a necklace for you just so you can understand,
All day long I sing sweet words trying to make you blush,
But the moon is full tonight so for now we'll just hush.


That is soooo sweet! Awwww! I'm crying right now! :'( :'( :'(
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 19:41

eminemgirl1234 wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Little somethin I wrote for somebody real special

If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't weep,
When I have the brightest star shining smiling at me,
I don't need it's light to guide me through the night,
All I need is you there holding me tight,
If the moon fell tonight I wouldn't cry I wouldn't scream,
About this angel and her kisses I would silently dream,
So save me a spot deep under the covers,
When I can't sleep we can cease being eachother,
If the moon fell tonight I would write in the dark,
Through words I submit every part of my heart,
Invite you in, come and sleep in my soul,
So many hearts have been ripped apart but you're keeping mine whole,
If the moon fell tonight I would hold it in my hands,
Put it in a necklace for you just so you can understand,
All day long I sing sweet words trying to make you blush,
But the moon is full tonight so for now we'll just hush.


That is soooo sweet! Awwww! I'm crying right now! :'( :'( :'(


hahahahahah awe thanks chica :8)
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 15th, '09, 22:02

You laugh too much it's annoying! Just kidding! I laugh alot,too! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! See, can't control myself...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! hahahahha! Whooo! That was funny! :D
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 23:27

eminemgirl1234 wrote:You laugh too much it's annoying! Just kidding! I laugh alot,too! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! See, can't control myself...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! hahahahha! Whooo! That was funny! :D


Yeah I get carried away sometimes
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: If the moon fell down tonight

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 16th, '09, 16:21

Yah-hah wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:You laugh too much it's annoying! Just kidding! I laugh alot,too! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! See, can't control myself...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! hahahahha! Whooo! That was funny! :D


Yeah I get carried away sometimes


Clearly. :p
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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