keep at the writing... definently liking the vocab and multis... if u got time id apreciate if u could check out some of mineThe Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Edge » Dec 20th, '09, 21:52
good shit man keep at the writing... definently liking the vocab and multis... if u got time id apreciate if u could check out some of mine
keep at the writing... definently liking the vocab and multis... if u got time id apreciate if u could check out some of minebe the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 21st, '09, 05:56
The Edge wrote:good shit man
Feedback looking good.
Yeah, I'll definitely feed some of your shit.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 07:42
Bump. 
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Edge » Dec 22nd, '09, 16:15
Relapse.LP wrote:Bump.
why do u constantly say bump? lmao
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 20:27
The Edge wrote:Relapse.LP wrote:Bump.
why do u constantly say bump? lmao
Do you know what it means?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 20:28
Geno wrote:Dope vocabulary. I loved the 2nd verse. Lots of good multies and wordplay too.
You should record it.
Thanks.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Edge » Dec 22nd, '09, 22:03
Relapse.LP wrote:The Edge wrote:Relapse.LP wrote:Bump.
why do u constantly say bump? lmao
Do you know what it means?
nah
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 22:21
^ It means "I would like more feedback/readers." ^
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Edge » Dec 22nd, '09, 22:26
Relapse.LP wrote:^ It means "I would like more feedback/readers." ^
ohh haha i hate when i dont get feedback
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 22:46
The Edge wrote:Relapse.LP wrote:^ It means "I would like more feedback/readers." ^
ohh haha i hate when i dont get feedback
Then you got to bump it. I got many techniques to get feedback.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/
-Black Star, Definition
Live free. Die hard.
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Re: The Bleeding Crown (Resurrection)
by Edge » Dec 23rd, '09, 00:22
Relapse.LP wrote:The Edge wrote:Relapse.LP wrote:^ It means "I would like more feedback/readers." ^
ohh haha i hate when i dont get feedback
Then you got to bump it. I got many techniques to get feedback.
haha il have to start
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