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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 05:11

^motherfucking DAMN straight man. LOL. A diss intended to squash a beef triggers another beef, along with a motherfuckng response. Dope. :smoking:

I'm waiting. :shifty:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby 2sDay » Jan 4th, '10, 05:11

Relapse.LP wrote:
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Relapse.LP wrote:You're a fucking horrible writer with a fucking horrible self-esteem. :shifty: :shifty:

you swear excessively...... :tounge2:
pussy..

N.igga, it's on. Drop a verse dissing me and I'll drop a verse dissing you. :y:

im going to sleep so drop ur wack-ass verse....
first...
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:12

gutawafang wrote:^motherfucking DAMN straight man. LOL. A diss intended to squash a beef triggers another beef, along with a motherfuckng response. Dope. :smoking:

I'm waiting. :shifty:

My verse is written. :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 05:13

Relapse.LP wrote:
gutawafang wrote:^motherfucking DAMN straight man. LOL. A diss intended to squash a beef triggers another beef, along with a motherfuckng response. Dope. :smoking:

I'm waiting. :shifty:

My verse is written. :shifty:

Post it now then. :shifty:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 4th, '10, 05:17

Chet Starr, you ruined the fun. :(
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 4th, '10, 05:18

Relapse.LP wrote:Chet Starr, you ruined the fun. :(

LOL. It's always like that. :guitar:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 07:51

bro, dont go against relapse if ur only gunna go that hard... i didnt even bother to c if my name was mentioned cause after the 1st two lines didnt rhyme (as usual) i stopped reading... relapse will kill u... i aint even wasting time on u when i got a battle tomorrow... ur just mad cuz i wouldnt let u in the group
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Spyder » Jan 4th, '10, 14:31

:coffee:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 4th, '10, 14:37

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Tranquil » Jan 4th, '10, 14:47

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 4th, '10, 17:08

you know F&F is not here anymore.. So its not really a diss :coffee:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby mcZu » Jan 4th, '10, 19:25

2sDay wrote:Like mcZu, why is a holland boy rapping?, shouldn't you be selling flowers for free,
5 Star Posers and Forums Faggots, acting all tough when they really hug trees,
Watch Glee, and live in Holland(mcZu), Y'all should be gettin a backhand,


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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 4th, '10, 20:07

mcZu wrote:
2sDay wrote:Like mcZu, why is a holland boy rapping?, shouldn't you be selling flowers for free,
5 Star Posers and Forums Faggots, acting all tough when they really hug trees,
Watch Glee, and live in Holland(mcZu), Y'all should be gettin a backhand,


How do you sell something for free?


Lol thats what i was thinking. :whistle:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Spyder » Jan 4th, '10, 21:52

Smithy wrote:
mcZu wrote:
2sDay wrote:Like mcZu, why is a holland boy rapping?, shouldn't you be selling flowers for free,
5 Star Posers and Forums Faggots, acting all tough when they really hug trees,
Watch Glee, and live in Holland(mcZu), Y'all should be gettin a backhand,


How do you sell something for free?


Lol thats what i was thinking. :whistle:


no it wasnt you just noticed it :whistle:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Solace » Jan 4th, '10, 22:28

I stopped reading after the 2nd line. The first lines are usually supposed to be really good in a piece, and yours didn't even rhyme.
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