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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 22:26

Yah-hah wrote:idk Sol. It seems like all the vets say new guys stuff isnt good cause they aint automatically the best on the site. I mean you aint gotta be all lik eit was bad or watever. I liked it thought it was entertaining. But ya aint gotta shoot newer cats down like yall did FnF.


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 22:27

Mr. Ree wrote:
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Mr. Ree wrote:I see, you're one of those people who must always get the last word in. I bet you're about 15 or younger, because that's the kind of thing they do. Go ahead, have the last word after this post lad, if it makes you feel like you've won. I surrender.


lol u obviously looked at his profile to see his age
but anyhow he does know what hes talking about with rap

but on topic... i thought it was a nice, especially for one of ur first drops... u had basic multis which will improve with time... the punchlines were alright, some were bleh and some were nice... so keep at it man :y:


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 22:29

Edge wrote:lol u obviously looked at his profile to see his age
but anyhow he does know what hes talking about with rap

Thanks I guess.

Yah-hah wrote:idk Sol. It seems like all the vets say new guys stuff isnt good cause they aint automatically the best on the site. I mean you aint gotta be all lik eit was bad or watever. I liked it thought it was entertaining. But ya aint gotta shoot newer cats down like yall did FnF.

I don't see why it would matter to you if we had a quick friendly beef with F&F, considering all the people in 5SG helped the members of FnF improve. I said it was bad, it's my opinion, it's not like I said "Wow that was fucking garbage leave this site now you're horrible.". I gave some advice, I have no regret on saying I found it bad and a good place to start practicing for him was getting up to 4 to 4 multi-syllable rhymes.

And if I were one to shoot newer cats down, is that why I collaborated with Edge, or that I'm cool with Edge, Bullet Boy and D.O.N?
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:29

Damn you extra new huh. lol no problem homie. I'm Yah-hah, welcome to TR. Some of these cats'll give you some harsh criticism, but don't sweat it bro, just do you
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:30

Naw aint trippin like that, It just seemed like yall shot em down pretty quick, aint mean to really aim it at you just talkin bout all the vets kinda in general, my bad bro. Not trying to make it seem like its all you
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 22:33

It's all cool man I can see what you're saying but most of the vets are just trying to help people improve. Tough love lol.
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:35

Yeah, I got love for the newer guys, cause I was there just like 3 months ago, now Im kinda good :shifty:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Mr. Ree » Jan 8th, '10, 22:37

you're looking for solace, you're on it to be honest i'm polished
run down your forrest with tonic rhymes all erotic and honest

like sonic i'm on it, you stammer as i chase you with a hammer
i'll erase you from my planner, smash your face into the scanner

and make a little banner, with your face on it crying
grow some balls you pussy nigga, you may wanna try it

how's that.
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 22:37

Why are you dissing me lol :unsure:
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Mr. Ree » Jan 8th, '10, 22:38

Solace wrote:Why are you dissing me lol :unsure:


Ignore that, how's the multies.
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:39

:laughing: :laughing: LMAO
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 22:40

They're okay.
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 22:47

lmao i actually think that diss is better than the first piece u dropped...

solace tells it how it is... hes blunt and brutal lol but it makes u wanna do better to prove him wrong...
yah-hahs the nice rappers whose always got something to boost ya confidence... he always gives some positive even if hes giving some negative... hes the one who doesnt let u get frustrated with bad feed

both are needed to get better so props to both for doing what they do

mr. ree i liked what iv seen so far so keep at it man :y:

but from experience... dont beef with anyone from 5SG, ur better off lol
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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 8th, '10, 22:49

Or Gravedancers :shifty: Damnit I'm always the nice one
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Mr. Ree - First Grade Cunt

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 22:49

Edge wrote:lmao i actually think that diss is better than the first piece u dropped...

solace tells it how it is... hes blunt and brutal lol but it makes u wanna do better to prove him wrong...

So saying "It's bad" and proceeding to give positive advice is "blunt and brutal" :unsure:
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