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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 13th, '10, 08:37

And the award for "The Most Improved Writer" goes to... :hooray:

Edge. Congratulations. Congratulations, indeed. =D>
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)

Postby Element. » Jan 13th, '10, 08:38

Relapse.LP wrote:And the award for "The Most Improved Writer" goes to... :hooray:

Edge. Congratulations. Congratulations, indeed. =D>


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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby Edge » Jan 13th, '10, 08:41

New Chorus!!! :D
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby Element. » Jan 13th, '10, 08:46

Edge wrote:New Chorus!!! :D

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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby Edge » Jan 13th, '10, 08:54

Smithy wrote:
Edge wrote:New Chorus!!! :D

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u like this one better?
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 13th, '10, 09:00

I definitely prefer this chours than the previous one man. :b:
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby Edge » Jan 13th, '10, 09:12

gutawafang wrote:I definitely prefer this chours than the previous one man. :b:


thanks man... i didnt like the 1st chorus either
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby GhanjaGod24 » Jan 13th, '10, 20:48

:y: :y: Two thumbs up for this, Edge your shit is def. getting a lot better

I can see you are putting more work into your raps :worship:
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

Postby Element. » Jan 13th, '10, 21:43

Edge wrote:
Smithy wrote:
Edge wrote:New Chorus!!! :D

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:


u like this one better?


Yeah man
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Re: Lyrical Trap (Full Song)

Postby Edge » Mar 30th, '10, 08:27

Relapse.LP wrote:And the award for "The Most Improved Writer" goes to... :hooray:

Edge. Congratulations. Congratulations, indeed. =D>


just saw this... thank you lol
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