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Postby D@vid » Feb 28th, '07, 07:18

Kaotic wrote:your prime date



let me clean off the slate and let everyone start fresh
my flows just seem too whack and really dont mesh
but the funny thing is i dont give a shit
i still won battles and barely spit
here i go again, saying basic rhymes with no multies to show I shine
I got no word play, but I still take the time, go slow and make sure I rhyme
some people cant even do that
that
Life is just one big lesson
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Postby 4D » Apr 16th, '07, 15:18

Hey David, you and this thread are incompatible,
When you rhyme lines in text it isn't practical,
Your self-dissin tactical and wisdoms laughable,
MY lyrical systems magical like Gandalf The Grey,
I`m a rhyme predator who just back-slaps his prey,
I Attract gals to play, untempted ones I fast-tag as gay,
Those groovy lesbians actin like movie thespians
Who won't ride bareback with a true equestrian.
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 17th, '07, 06:18

FORDIE wrote:true equestrian.


accrue burden on the new craftsman he'll miscue it like the debut batsman

how was it? :unsure:
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Postby James R. » Apr 30th, '07, 01:53

true equestrian

If my lines dont get through your head I'll shoot the chest again
Step the game up you watchin pornos and I'm usin lesbians
Spit six lines of sick rhymes she lose the shirt, I move the dress and then
She poke it out I stroke it out gettin semen on shoes her chest and chin
I mean bitches love me cuz they know that my flow is somethin vicious
I get ass like a park bench and get tongue like girls blowin bubalicious


haha fun as hell
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 30th, '07, 02:00

James R. wrote:blowin bubalicious


You know I'm trouble, vicious when I start to rap my words
I'm so dark like bats that will depart and snap your nerves
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby James R. » Apr 30th, '07, 02:32

depart and snap your nerves

My art's attackin words like a book burning cult/
Then stop minds in their tracks like I put words in halt/
I got fiends for my rhymes like I cook verbs in coke/
You battle me it's a done deal you get shook nerves and choke/
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Postby Ka0t1c » May 1st, '07, 08:27

shook nerves and choke

are yall book worms, no joke
cuz all i see are hard called lookin words you wrote
and so i fall apart like a terd that broke
i thought i was smart but i havent earned the jolt
i guess im dumb and youre the nerd i note
in my own personal one journal, i dubbed "the art of quotes"
how come ya start to close up this far in the post?
is it cuz the bars aren't large enough for most?
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Postby 4D » May 1st, '07, 14:19

Start the bluffin post about bein' smart and fuckin boast, 'cos it's all white lies
And all my rhymes scald like fries when false guys bite on the scrawls I write!
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Postby C-Game » May 1st, '07, 14:28

ur claws-which-write bars thats warped-its-tight like ma gals dark entrance
but 5 days per month its closed due to da fucked up yeuck mensus


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Postby 4D » May 1st, '07, 14:46

:confusion: :zipped: [-X :p

Call the stuck-up censors c-game he claimed the yeuck mensus in his-cussing rhyme,
What a disgusting line, call the politically correct elect to erect a sect discussion time
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Postby James R. » May 1st, '07, 20:59

Those reluctant rhymes aint enough to get in my face/
it's always a competition until I get in the race/
The new cats and the vets is all facin the defeat/
I'm dope I spit bass and touch keys like I'm makin a beat/
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 1st, '07, 21:09

you taking a beat be fake-in the streat no stake-in this heat
break-in the beat fry'd like a steak-in the heat no breakin my fleat


...lmao i hate keystyling :(
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Postby JMG » May 1st, '07, 21:17

makin a beat tuckin techs and 9'z
raisin the heat crushin necks and spines
take a seat or fuckin step in line
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Postby Big-T » May 1st, '07, 21:55

...or get wrecked in time, and fucking served on a plate
Try to learn a second rhyme, get murdered in your place
burnt like a fake, you prefer to be a waste, ur nerdy prey
nervous on a date wid a bitch i've alredi splurged in tha face
Clones are people two.
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Postby James R. » May 1st, '07, 22:56

splurged in the face

hurtin the greats make you turn at the waist
I don't make CD's cuz the lyrics burnin the case
You tauntin me? why? even if you honestly tried
I'd kill you cuz all my superiors already died
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