A Rape Story (I found this on MySpace

[AspirinE]

asp...why can't it NOT be true?

i'm not saying it is... cuz most likely the author just put herself in a situation she created her own and wrote about it... which i see nothing wrong with, cuz i do that all the time... that's what's great about writing... you can free yourself from reality and write whatever you wanna write about... whether it be true or not...

but anywho... what makes you so sure that it's NOT true?

there's 6 billion people in the world.

Im not denying shit like this happens, but could the author have been raped?

NO.


What kind of person who was raped would write about dying wen being raped, especially talking of her father, the sickest possible scenario. I have no doubt that this is written by a person that has never experienced such shock.

I personally have met girls that have had this kind awefull experience, and trust me none of them would ever even talk about it simply coz they are embarrased and ashamed of themselves, i could not imagine such person writing this type of sick shit on her myspace.

[polluted]

I put it in creative writing for a reason besides

well its not something ppl should be yappin bout, u know?

[polluted]

poeple shouldn't talk about drugs, or gang violence, or any of that hateful shit, and yet... i'm assuming you listen to eminem and are a fan of rap music, which mostly consists of that.

ep had a point... it is creative writing, no matter how terrible it can be.

y'all a buncha hyporites for liking eminem and not taking any offense into his lyrics, and yet ragging on this poem.

if you don't like it, don't read it.

well u can go fuck urself u fuckin hyprocrite
its u whu gotta be ashamed of supportin such shit

it may derange someone whi might come across it

[AspirinE]

and trust me none of them would ever even talk about it simply coz they are embarrased and ashamed of themselves

see, that's where i disagree.

if i went through a situation like that or a friend goes through that, i would encourage her to speak out and talk about it.

it's sucks to keep everything bottled up, especially something as hurtful as that. cuz in a way, you're keeping all the pain to yourself, when other poeple wanna help you and take some of that pain away.

when i read your post about that emo bitch, i kinda got the feeling that you didn't like the poem, and not the for the reason that most people won't like it.

i just don't see why you got something against that type of writing

No u wouldnt be sitting on the internet wrting about how ur daddy raped u and killed u on the internet andpaste these poems on myspace. Thats just degenerate. Think about it. The worst case: the girl was raped by her father and ecides to write a poem, how incredibly painfull would it also be to write that he killed u?


This is typical imagination poem and i dont have anything against it, im saying that the author is a black-eye-liner-wearing, I-will-slit-mywrist-coz-the-world-is-mean type of emo girl.

[rap_gurl]

Wow its real powerful.

I dont really care what all u ppl wrote, didnt even read most of the posts, this was real powerful, and almost made me cry, what a horrific dad.

[Inzanity]

I put it in creative writing for a reason besides

well its not something ppl should be yappin bout, u know?

I'm not yappin' about it alright I just found it on MySpace and I thought it was real powerfull so I posted it here I didn't think it would offend any1 I didn't get offended by it and I was raped b4 more then once and I thought this poem spread a very powerful message about todays violence because this stuff happens everyday in this world

[Inzanity]

thank u TruEmFan, Sarah and rap_gurl

[polluted]

wuteva, u brainless fagget

[polluted]

how stupid should a nigga be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

[Inzanity]

how stupid should a ***** be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

hey buddy look u must be the biggest hypocrite in the world cause' u listen to Eminem and mostly Eminem talks about is violence and rape and drugs and murder so just shut the fuck cause' ur makin' urself look stupid

[AspirinE]

how stupid should a ***** be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

I totally agree with this, but U guys still gots to chill, its just a little poem written by someone mentally disturbed lol.

[Inzanity]

how stupid should a ***** be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

i could be wrong in this case but he might not listen em ....not every1 here does

hey buddy look u must be the biggest hypocrite in the world cause' u listen to Eminem and mostly Eminem talks about is violence and rape and drugs and murder so just shut the fuck cause' ur makin' urself look stupid

da hell did my comment go lol

not every1 here listens to eminem ...idk bout polluted though

this forums weird not every1 listens to Eminem but they all come to an Eminem forum it makes no sense

[Inzanity]

how stupid should a ***** be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

i could be wrong in this case but he might not listen em ....not every1 here does

hey buddy look u must be the biggest hypocrite in the world cause' u listen to Eminem and mostly Eminem talks about is violence and rape and drugs and murder so just shut the fuck cause' ur makin' urself look stupid

da hell did my comment go lol

not every1 here listens to eminem ...idk bout polluted though

this forums weird not every1 listens to Eminem but they all come to an Eminem forum it makes no sense

shady/aftermath forum

oh I see ur point

[$0 R3@L]

how stupid should a ***** be

ait, lemme roll onto it

u believe this nasty piece deserves posting cuz it's shocking and provoking. You believe that it should be promulgated so that everyone knows as to how brutal people can sometimes be even to they own seeds. Well u prolly ryt cuz ur used to the way like this...cuz ur fucking american mentality is all about scaring people away with horrendous things like raping an innocent child. Y'all civilization is so perverse and frightned with the things even ur media are glamorizing...violence....mass murder...profanity...total disbelief in anything...anarchy....and brainless individuals like u are simply perfect example of how effective ur machine for destruction of everything....moral foundations and reason itself...cuz u never aspire to future u'all happy with them lousy pieces u hold in ya hands...u will never break out of this gridlock cuz u simply dont want it...
and this rape story is merely a ground to examplify how sheer a chasm ya'll people standing on the brink of...it's simply a warped mentality pattern that proves ur imminent collapse...

i dotn agree with all your views but must admit you posted your views in a superb way and really made sense bruv

[Inzanity]

Look every1 sorry for the trouble this topic caused I didn't think any1 would start arguing. I didn't mean to piss any1 off again I'm sorry