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I've Still Got It

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Re: I've Still Got It

Postby Block » Dec 6th, '11, 21:59

Mr.DGAF wrote:Not to hop into this arguement or whatever, but Block. Dude you think you could feed a piece of mine? I just remember seeing your writtens on here, and they were really impressive, and I just wanted some more opinions on my work. If not it's cool, just a wondering.

Sure. I'm on my phone so just pm me links, man.
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Re: I've Still Got It

Postby SG. » Dec 9th, '11, 01:03

Or get banned and ignore me. Sure.
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Re: I've Still Got It

Postby Wreck » Dec 9th, '11, 23:58

This was good, the flow was the best, and the dexterity of it was good, but it didn't make sense at times, so try to write something that either follows a topic or is just a spitting piece that is a little more clear. Overall though I liked it, good job man :y:.
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