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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 29th, '09, 04:58

lol why would Xray be so mean....and I still dont get it random indian girl??? how does that pertain
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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Xray » Jul 29th, '09, 05:04

I was playing dude.

Anyways man, I thought it flowed really well, and you got the point across and thats what matters. So good job man. :y:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone

New Track: The Nightmare
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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 29th, '09, 05:12

Xray wrote:I was playing dude.

Anyways man, I thought it flowed really well, and you got the point across and thats what matters. So good job man. :y:

thanks man...
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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 29th, '09, 06:27

Yo mna I actually really dug it. My favorite line was
"so ask yourself when did you cross the line
cause your sanity cost me mine"
Dope line.
hahahahha yeah your voice sounds kinda different but I think you could make it work for a more serious song.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Solace » Jul 29th, '09, 17:27

Fa-Q wrote:lol why would Xray be so mean....and I still dont get it random indian girl??? how does that pertain

Dots fired = dot on indian girls head

its a joke smh loosen up :flower:
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Re: Fa-Q - My Time Has Come (My Favorite)

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 29th, '09, 18:35

Solace wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:lol why would Xray be so mean....and I still dont get it random indian girl??? how does that pertain

Dots fired = dot on indian girls head

its a joke smh loosen up :flower:

lol i get it now...took me a while tho
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