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I Finish You (Boston Diss)

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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 26th, '09, 08:55

da.relapse.lp wrote:Damn, that was one dope verse. I was somehow listening to the Renegade instrumental while freestyling and this verse fits perfectly on top of it, haha.

But I gotta agree this dissing should calm down. If someone called you a motherfucker in real life, I doubt you would spit a verse in his face. :whistle:

hehe thanks =P yeah it flows well i just tried xD :smoking:
and as if someone calls me a motherfuker in real lfe of course wouldnt spit a verse in his face but probably literally spit on his face ROFL
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 26th, '09, 09:37

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:his disses were like .. 8 lines .. that's nothing to worry about, he wasn't even being serious i bet.

Exactly what I think.
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Boston » Sep 26th, '09, 14:12

hahahaha im not even going to lie i did laugh at some parts lmaooo
honestly, i dont dick ride axe in any sort of way. i just didnt like the way you went at him. there are a lot of people on this site i will ride for. my favorite line in here was the pale shit. thats the only one i actually laughed at actually. but ill admit i literally laughed out loud.

way better multi's here than ur solace diss. structure is much better. it started off iffy tho
at first you said you heard of me, then u said im a nobody n no1 heard of me

lol idk. ima smoke a blunt now and look for beats
ill get back 2 u soon hopefully
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 26th, '09, 14:16

Boston wrote:hahahaha im not even going to lie i did laugh at some parts lmaooo
honestly, i dont dick ride axe in any sort of way. i just didnt like the way you went at him. there are a lot of people on this site i will ride for. my favorite line in here was the pale shit. thats the only one i actually laughed at actually. but ill admit i literally laughed out loud.

way better multi's here than ur solace diss. structure is much better. it started off iffy tho
at first you said you heard of me, then u said im a nobody n no1 heard of me

lol idk. ima smoke a blunt now and look for beats
ill get back 2 u soon hopefully

i know some parts were funny lol u forgot to mention the " leave britney alone" line too xD :p
Boston wrote:it started off iffy tho
at first you said you heard of me, then u said im a nobody n no1 heard of me

err maybe that means no one heard of u ,except me =P ;)

many people sayin i shouldnt have done this, u know they'r wrong, it is wat it is man,like said em xd "let em diss u first and respond immediately!" xD
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Boston » Sep 26th, '09, 14:19

the britney line wasnt all THAT good to me. you really had no personals. if you wana actually diss people you got to make punchlines relating to them. not just punchlines in general

like i can be saying punchlines like

beat you with a brief sweat, see through like your T's wet
you suck so much dick you walk around with your knees bent

idk thats why when i did drop those '8' bars those were NO where near my best but it was 8 bars of somewhat personals (pics) i was just attacking one thing.
i will most likely diss you back in text, audio i dont know yet. i spend money to go to a studio, n you idk if there worth it. if sac donates 10 dollars ill diss you lol. people donate 25 cents each to my paypal to diss him. nah but you never know. i might come up with audio, 300 bars and running :whistle:
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Boston » Sep 26th, '09, 14:26

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
beat you with a brief sweat, see through like your T's wet
you suck so much dick you walk around with your knees bent


that beats his entire diss lol, sooo funny :laughing:


i got more unreleased punchlines i thought sucked so i didnt release! ill put those all together and battle
lol jk
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 26th, '09, 14:31

Boston wrote:the britney line wasnt all THAT good to me. you really had no personals. if you wana actually diss people you got to make punchlines relating to them. not just punchlines in general

like i can be saying punchlines like

beat you with a brief sweat, see through like your T's wet
you suck so much dick you walk around with your knees bent

idk thats why when i did drop those '8' bars those were NO where near my best but it was 8 bars of somewhat personals (pics) i was just attacking one thing.
i will most likely diss you back in text, audio i dont know yet. i spend money to go to a studio, n you idk if there worth it. if sac donates 10 dollars ill diss you lol. people donate 25 cents each to my paypal to diss him. nah but you never know. i might come up with audio, 300 bars and running :whistle:

lol 300 bars :o i did just like, 100 bar almost,,,
anyways its true i dont give importance to personals , i just go more lyrical and in some ways sometimes funny....you see them haters, when i drop something good they just shut it and dont even comment on here,not even negatively,and they know who i am talkin about, smh :y:

@scotty: cmon scott :shifty: those two lines are funny ,true ,but doesnt beat a 100 bars diss lol
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Boston » Sep 26th, '09, 14:36

le tunisien wrote:lol 300 bars :o i did just like, 100 bar almost,,,
anyways its true i dont give importance to personals , i just go more lyrical and in some ways sometimes funny....you see them haters, when i drop something good they just shut it and dont even comment on here,not even negatively,and they know who i am talkin about, smh :y:

@scotty: cmon scott :shifty: those two lines are funny ,true ,but doesnt beat a 100 bars diss lol


but if your dissing someone thats the thing, you have to care about personals. you have to attack your opponent personally. to use the axe example again, you said shit about his shows and all that type of shit. do your research. like look, i know you post in the shady shot section a lot. i did quick research. it makes a big difference
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Re: I Finish You (Boston Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 26th, '09, 14:41

Boston wrote:
le tunisien wrote:lol 300 bars :o i did just like, 100 bar almost,,,
anyways its true i dont give importance to personals , i just go more lyrical and in some ways sometimes funny....you see them haters, when i drop something good they just shut it and dont even comment on here,not even negatively,and they know who i am talkin about, smh :y:

@scotty: cmon scott :shifty: those two lines are funny ,true ,but doesnt beat a 100 bars diss lol


but if your dissing someone thats the thing, you have to care about personals. you have to attack your opponent personally. to use the axe example again, you said shit about his shows and all that type of shit. do your research. like look, i know you post in the shady shot section a lot. i did quick research. it makes a big difference

thats true :shifty: u knw,i already never said that im better than u or anything,and never said that im unstoppable,and for ur info,i do recognize that ur audios-lyrics are dope, i never relate the hate with truth :y:
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