Pussy Writers (Bullet Boy & Smithy Diss)

[Element.]

Not really.

well its better then me.

[classthe_king]

now class class class, you got tips. we all got tips, anon helped me and solace
weve helped eachother anon helped ya, zu and anon helped eachother
its all good

but yes they like crave help

Actually the only thing i can think of is Zu telling me to find a beat that inspires me and then write to that. That's it.

And anon left me
You need structure, some of your lines didn't make much sense, to many unneeded multies, little wordplay, flow was off, and no stand out lines to me.
Though I see you have potential; so that's always a good thing.
Keep writing.

On my first drop. But i had the ambition to make myself better and know what was better

[Element.]

but yes they like crave help

word its not like adding a little bit of multi use is hard...We-fucked, She-Ducked not too difficult..

Lee-Chucked, He-Sucked

[Solace]

Great job.

Though I don't know why you'd be talking about guys sucking

[Element.]

Great job.

Though I don't know why you'd be talking about guys sucking

Lmao!
first thing came to my mind :S its 2 in the mornin in the UK i aint thinking

[2sDay]

F&F split it up like as fast as a broken heart.
holy shit.

[Element.]

F&F split it up like as fast as a broken heart.
holy shit.

Lol,

[Spyder]

now class class class, you got tips. we all got tips, anon helped me and solace
weve helped eachother anon helped ya, zu and anon helped eachother
its all good

but yes they like crave help

Actually the only thing i can think of is Zu telling me to find a beat that inspires me and then write to that. That's it.

And anon left me
You need structure, some of your lines didn't make much sense, to many unneeded multies, little wordplay, flow was off, and no stand out lines to me.
Though I see you have potential; so that's always a good thing.
Keep writing.

On my first drop. But i had the ambition to make myself better and know what was better

well yes thats basically the extent of him helping me, just told me what i need to fix lol

[classthe_king]

now class class class, you got tips. we all got tips, anon helped me and solace
weve helped eachother anon helped ya, zu and anon helped eachother
its all good

but yes they like crave help

Actually the only thing i can think of is Zu telling me to find a beat that inspires me and then write to that. That's it.

And anon left me
You need structure, some of your lines didn't make much sense, to many unneeded multies, little wordplay, flow was off, and no stand out lines to me.
Though I see you have potential; so that's always a good thing.
Keep writing.

On my first drop. But i had the ambition to make myself better and know what was better

well yes thats basically the extent of him helping me, just told me what i need to fix lol

And thats what were saying to them lol

[Spyder]

well ok calm yourself

[gutawafang]

man, dissing is fun.

[Solace]

man, dissing is fun.

Does that mean you liked my verse?

[gutawafang]

man, dissing is fun.

Does that mean you liked my verse?

oh yeah. of course. I meant YOU make it fun by dropping this verse.

[2sDay]

I'm making a diss to F&F and 5SG. right now to maybe squash the beef or restart a beef idk

[gutawafang]

I'm making a diss to F&F and 5SG. right now to maybe squash the beef or restart a beef idk

hahaha.