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War feat. ShaBruv

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 00:52

Instrumental http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ijnkVqeYgE

[Cosh]
My hearts a guitar and the Lord is plucking at it's strings
But If my soul were a kingdom, Satan would be it's king.
A battle between light and dark takes place on my mind
Jesus and Lucifer, the generals who lead the front lines.
Lust is the Evil's Navy, and Piety is the Righteous' Ground.
The fighting weighs heavy, on my thoughts a Nightly Pound.
I suit up for Christ's side, but always become a Benedict Arnold.
Switching sides, and becoming the Devil's Rethoric Emerald.
While all of things go on I put up a Placid smile.
Little do they know a war of epic proportions rages higher.
I fight and fight, but always end up K.O.ed on the floor,
The Lord picks me up, only to be denied once more.
Rage, Addiction, Lying, and Lust attack from all angles,
Prayer isn't strong enough to catch me from their tangles.
In my nightmares, I fight all night, only to wake up mangled.
The pain leaves me in wallows, I pick God's side but the Devil still lurks in the shadows.

[ShaBruv]
Satan's my master and he's following me around
Leaving me in pieces bodies hollow in ground,
Sorrow i surround, i'm afraid this could be,
the fucking darkest day of everyday in history
But they whisper to me, and i cannot resist,
The fucking anarchy, a satan activist
Into the black abyss, where the soul's sucked
The Eyes are gouged out and the mouth is sewn shut
Now imagine slut, if your at death's door
Would you sink to hell or would you take the next floor
Would you expect more,or would you take the least,
Call triple 6, and awake the beast.
Quake at the feet, bow before this final chapter
Take with heed, this warning, that i'm firing at ya,
Try an capture this - keep this message well kept
Don't challenge Satan, cuz he'll haunt you from the hell depths



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Re: A War

Postby Evil-Genius » Nov 29th, '10, 00:56

Very nice :rock:
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Re: A War

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 00:57

Evil-Genius wrote:Very nice :rock:

thanks alot bro, i appreciate it
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Re: A War

Postby Evil-Genius » Nov 29th, '10, 00:59

CoSh wrote:
Evil-Genius wrote:Very nice :rock:

thanks alot bro, i appreciate it

Np , Nice lines there , Imagined it on a beat as i read it , And I think it would sound awesome ,

Anyway , Good luck ! :flower:
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Re: A War

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 01:06

Evil-Genius wrote:
CoSh wrote:
Evil-Genius wrote:Very nice :rock:

thanks alot bro, i appreciate it

Np , Nice lines there , Imagined it on a beat as i read it , And I think it would sound awesome ,

Anyway , Good luck ! :flower:

thanks man, and was it a specific beat that i could hear on like youtube or no?
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Re: A War

Postby Evil-Genius » Nov 29th, '10, 01:20



I`d imagine something like this , With a slightly fast flow ,
I dont know though I might be wrong , But based on your lyrics , You need a dark beat :D
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Re: A War

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 01:23

Evil-Genius wrote:

I`d imagine something like this , With a slightly fast flow ,
I dont know though I might be wrong , But based on your lyrics , You need a dark beat :D

Holy shit, that's incredible. if i knew how to record i would record it in a instant
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Re: A War

Postby Evil-Genius » Nov 29th, '10, 01:28

Hey I can have that beat in MP3 file for you if you want ?
And Recording , Its simple , You need a Mic , and a software called " Wavepad " Its free , search in google !
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Re: A War

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 01:29

Evil-Genius wrote:Hey I can have that beat in MP3 file for you if you want ?
And Recording , Its simple , You need a Mic , and a software called " Wavepad " Its free , search in google !

oh ok, but i don't have a mic
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Re: A War

Postby Evil-Genius » Nov 29th, '10, 01:32

CoSh wrote:
Evil-Genius wrote:Hey I can have that beat in MP3 file for you if you want ?
And Recording , Its simple , You need a Mic , and a software called " Wavepad " Its free , search in google !

oh ok, but i don't have a mic


Ow , Well maybe you`ll have one some other time ! , in the mean time , practice :p
Heres the beat : http://www.zshare.net/audio/83266165a4937732/

Good luck.
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Re: A War

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 29th, '10, 01:37

Evil-Genius wrote:
CoSh wrote:
Evil-Genius wrote:Hey I can have that beat in MP3 file for you if you want ?
And Recording , Its simple , You need a Mic , and a software called " Wavepad " Its free , search in google !

oh ok, but i don't have a mic


Ow , Well maybe you`ll have one some other time ! , in the mean time , practice :p
Heres the beat : http://www.zshare.net/audio/83266165a4937732/

Good luck.

thanks alot man, i appreciate all the help
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Re: War feat. ShaBruv

Postby classthe_king » Dec 16th, '10, 00:23

who is who lol
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: War feat. ShaBruv

Postby ShaBruv » Dec 16th, '10, 00:27

I'm the better one

Nah I'm second
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: War feat. ShaBruv

Postby classthe_king » Dec 16th, '10, 04:13

Your verse was actually good, you had a good flow and some nice multis, I'll give you better feed tommorow, I'm tired as fuck.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: War feat. ShaBruv

Postby Solace » Dec 16th, '10, 04:44

ShaBruv wrote:I'm the better one

It's funny 'cause it's true.

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