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Just Fuckin Around

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Just Fuckin Around

Postby Atone » Dec 9th, '10, 08:08

I'm outta my mind like i'm in a coma- in a zone to- come flyin out the corner
smash you with a right hook- quick jab got you quite shook
scary to think how you might look- when i spit this
so you get to witness sothin so gifted like it's christmas
the way i flip this- i'm causin havoc
haters kiss my ass- i have you tossin salads
i'm rockin ballads you lost in the magic
it's so tragic the way i come so automatic
got you causin static and actin rude
i don't need your attitude- bring it down a lattitude
you mad i rap but i could of been a killer so be glad i do
as i take a jab at you so add this to my attributes
i'm somethin like a- creative writer
spittin nasty shit like i just ate a diaper
got you pissed like you got a deflated tire
cuz i come raw- i'm the one you hate to admire
cuz i found a way to inspire-
and i'm just tryin to let out the voice in my head
and let it spread like poison from lead
abd let it be said without a regret
no doubt you upset but you about to respect
cuz i'm out to inject this venom
and let it flow thru the rythem
so smooth you move when you listen
rockin when i come touchin the sound
now imagin if i actually tried to write0- i'm just fuckin around


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Re: Just Fuckin Around

Postby nickolas_warner » Dec 10th, '10, 07:06

That's pretty good for just messing around. Nice bragadocious rhymes.
I'd like to see what you write if you sit and put your mind to it.
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