Had a rap off at work today

by **Atone** » Dec 16th, '10, 08:06

I'm a debt consultant (the better version of a telemarketer) and today was slow, the dude next to me was kickin a verse from a song we just heard on the radio, and there's an other dude there that does some spanish rap, anyways, after the dude next to me finished the last verse of no love i felt like spittin a freestyle at em i can't remember everything i said but this is sort of how it went

(Verse)
fuck the radio i'mma spit this crazy flow so you can just start to hate me- yo
it don't matter how you take me i play with these words like scrabble and dabble in this battle
to rattle ya cages- scatter these pages i'm tryin to climb the ladder to greatness
and shake this up- today is a lil slow mo so yo- let me wake you up- like i'm foldiers
i'm in this game like a war i fight to win i'm a hip hop soldier
hitta cold and it's like like i got the weioght of the world on my shoulders
you spittin that shady line i kick these amazing rhymes
damn right i got a crazy mind- been thru this about 80 times
and i see you married- dude thats scary i think ya ladies blind
but whatever let me get clever and spit levels you aint heard before
first i burst these words galore- til you can't take the verse no more

and- clean up that drool you fool i schooled you now pick up that jaw kid
i know my flow was flawless- got you nauious like a recovering alcoholic

now i kept goin, and i c an't remember it all, but the spanish dude startin rappin, he got flow, although idk wtf half the shit he said was, but then i came back with this

Now this words i keep in my mind like a hordor
about to send this dude back over the border
and make his life a little bit shorter
but before the- swat can stop me i rock these
now watch me-and i ait gonna end upo on the highway with a sqeedgi
and a sign beggin you to feed me, believe me, i bleed these rhymes
the game needs my kind,

after that i can't remember the rest

anyways, we went on and on for like an hour straight, it was fun shit,

by **mdemaz** » Dec 16th, '10, 08:20

I haven't had a real rap battle since high school. I quit cause I raped them. And haters hated. ):

by **Atone** » Dec 16th, '10, 08:49

it was more like a cipher than a battle, but being that i used to battle every summer for 5 years straight i'm sort of a battle style rapper, but the spanish dude got alot of flow, the other dude is just a strange strange man lol, but he's cool shits

by **mdemaz** » Dec 16th, '10, 08:54

When I used to have my voice recorder in my mp3 in like 2006 (Before it broke, -_-) Used to mix cyphers with beats and release them to the school at battle of the bands; People would be buzzing.

Yeah while other kids were playing sports and talking on phones; I was in the lab fucken producing...shit dude. These days you still see kids cyphering rapping there hearts out to leave there bleak lives. It's really heart warming.

I can sorta relate to your situation atm; People always say meh to my records but when they hear me battle; That's where the real respect comes from.

by **Atone** » Dec 16th, '10, 08:57

yeah no doubt, they wasn't really thinkin i had much flow from the lyrics i was writin, until i actually started spittin, spanish dude asked me if i want to hop on a couple tracks with him to, i thought that was cool, the real funny part was when this older lady that works with us tried to rap, she was just bein funny, nothin serious, but at least everybody in the room was enjoying it all