You managed to maintain a stable catchy rhyme-scheme along with relevant witty lines. The vocab. was pretty basic but I think it worked well.
Keep it up!
Political 16
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Re: Political 16
by Steve Spag » Dec 17th, '10, 23:28
Very nice!
You managed to maintain a stable catchy rhyme-scheme along with relevant witty lines. The vocab. was pretty basic but I think it worked well.
Keep it up!
You managed to maintain a stable catchy rhyme-scheme along with relevant witty lines. The vocab. was pretty basic but I think it worked well.
Keep it up!
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Re: Political 16
by Fa-Q » Dec 22nd, '10, 08:28
Damn, Hesky, not bad at all....I'd like to see a whole piece out of this
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Re: Political 16
by Slim Zaddy » Dec 22nd, '10, 20:03
Not bad at all . It was smooth and it sounds good for audio . But you gota use some complexity for a political issue . But it's cool I enjoyed it keep it up bro
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