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The Funeral[Grandfather Tribute]

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The Funeral[Grandfather Tribute]

Postby shadyteamstaff » Dec 18th, '10, 05:59

he passed away today at 6:40 am..it is my lil tribute to him

tears roll knowing you passed away
Today is your funeral,I am not cool, there goes your life
I could not stand could not control myself
see you lying there, yes made me suffer
was by your side but had no idea
you were ok, even sick you laughed
I went home thinking that everything would improve
the next morning early I heard the phone ringing
it was the voice of a serious man seeking my presence
soon afterwards to hear a painful my sincere condolences
not believing I was running to see what was the situation
I was asked at the entrance height and weight, it was to provide your coffin
it was a shock an emotional pain
tried to be strong but the pain was almost beyond mortal
I know that you were at peace and didn't suffer
I know you were clever and today is next to god
I will stop writing here because it's getting hard
I may look tough, but i will always remind you

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Rest In Peace
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Re: The Funeral[Grandfather Tribute]

Postby WakeUpShow » Dec 18th, '10, 06:38

I'm sorry for your loss dude.

and as for the writing, it was very poetic but there was no rhyming...unless that was intentional?
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