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out too fast

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 20th, '10, 21:51

what happened back when we had fun
and laughin at our bad ones
it's too sad that that's gone
and to add on
remember the napster songs i nabbed from the net
now we've become a little different, yet
we can still get along
and we will hit a bong
when i'm there cuz we're really strong with our bond
so i'ma share my bomb and take care of my buds
i do swear til i'm gone off the map
all because you help me from
fallin flat on my ass, it's now in the past
but the best times
no doubt feel they went out too fast

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Last edited by Ka0t1c on Dec 20th, '10, 21:51, edited 1 time in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: out too fast

Postby Mr. Chambers » Dec 20th, '10, 21:51

link of feedback?
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so much WIN!
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Re: out too fast

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 21st, '10, 00:35

what are u talking about?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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