i wrote this last night...

[4D]

BRILLIANT!!

Great poem, very heartfelt. You should let him accidently find that poem!!

[Inzanity]

yea that was pretty good keep it up

[tamara]

it is really good stuff!u write lot of good!!!really!it is too sad the poem and of course the situation but it is beautiful..it touchs our hearts,i feel like im gona cry
beautiful and hey right more and show it to us,it is really really good!

[AspirinE]

Just tell him wat u feell. Tell him u wanna get it ooooonnn!!! lol .

But seriously, nice poem U should do more.

[Shadyluva]

BRILLIANT!!

Great poem, very heartfelt. You should let him accidently find that poem!!

i agree wit u this poem was really good...it was really deep...and i also hate the word "FRIEND"

[> Evil _ MoNkEy <]

i can so relate to this poem... i had a guy friend just like that, and i decided to take the chance and ask him to homecoming... and he rejected me... i told him he was sorry cus one day im gonna be a super modle... and then he said the day im a super modle is the day pigs fly outta his nose... needless to say, we are no longer friends..... but ur poem is very good... and as i said, i can relate to the situation