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15 Minute Verse

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15 Minute Verse

Postby classthe_king » Jan 28th, '11, 00:43

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=106865

Yo, as I’m rippin this beat
I got a flow like a stove as I’m spittin this heat
And I go after shows just pickin my teeth
Cause I eat rappers that try and get in my beef
Damn…you need to listen to me
Let me plague your ears with this sickening speech
Let me portray your fears with the myth of the beast
I’ll go head to head with the most gifted emcees
Damn… then they wish n they plead
That my Hip-Hop would stop killin they dreams
But I won’t stop, then cops visit the scene
See the scorch marks and know in an instant it’s me
Damn…I’m the most vicious to be
Alive when I vibe I hit quick with defeat
You wanna find the prize well this is the key
Pyromaniacs…the reign goes on infinitely

Might record it as just another Big Poppa freestyle type track but Iunno
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Re: 15 Minute Verse

Postby SajN » Jan 28th, '11, 00:44

Whoa, fucking loved it :worship:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: 15 Minute Verse

Postby classthe_king » Jan 31st, '11, 21:49

For the people saying they wanted to hear audio

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107279
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Re: 15 Minute Verse

Postby ArsheyHaq » Feb 25th, '11, 08:01

Niceee! I thought it was dope how you rhymed the whole rap with the same set of words, especially cuz the first few lines had a simple rhyme scheme..then it kept getting more and more intricate. You've gained a new fan.
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Re: 15 Minute Verse

Postby classthe_king » Feb 25th, '11, 23:33

Thanks man, I recorded this if you want to check it in my sig

or right above lolz
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