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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Apr 4th, '06, 00:22

:8) i like the lyrics :toocool: nice job..btw u kno ur gunna make it :sweating: u dont need to worry :happy: u jus keep gettin better and better nice job :king:
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Postby angelinajlover » Apr 4th, '06, 03:02

I like it. It's a little sad, but really good. I think you have the talent to make it. Good luck.
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Postby 4D » Apr 4th, '06, 08:47

Great story man, it`s something evrybody that writes thinks about. I don`t dream of getting famous as a rapper or any shit, but, i`m afraid of wasting a talent i might or might not have. I`m not ambitious or very determined, so I`m not very brilliant at much, but, I can do a bit of everything, which isn`t a bad deal. As for writing rhymes, got no great ambition for those either, i just like getting some feedback on them, that keeps me going.

Great rhyme man, hope you achieve your goals, your audios are cool as fuck!! :smoking:
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Postby DOPE » Apr 4th, '06, 16:57

FORDIE's rite man,

n i gotta say this, that was some real tite deep shit

record it!
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N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches


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