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What its Come to- Keystyle

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What its Come to- Keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Mar 26th, '11, 02:43

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=110629 ---feed :snack:


This is another one for pleading the fifth
Smothered in rum dumb as they come but a lawyer ill get
While stereotypes blast through different stereo types
Then i use what i heard and come back the next night
This is for a burden a lonely bird chirpin
Try to get high and drunk so lifes perfect
In lifes verses the flows not always smooth
We don't live a Biggie flow and often its shitty though
This is for the money but i get the reciprocal
Its "Proof" that my lifes been difficult
I try with a different poem but im still my own bitter foe
This for the doubts that I had from heart
Savaged dark nights through your average park
Held those stark thoughts for the maddest parts
But mostly this is my own right tonight
So those who left me can kiss my limelight
Cause when I rhyme like the way that I do
I feel like a parade of moods have barricaded my room
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Re: This is what it is..

Postby Just Silver » Mar 26th, '11, 16:13

bumpin :(
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Re: What its Come to- Keystyle

Postby gutawafang » Mar 29th, '11, 18:22

Its "Proof" that my lifes been difficult

nice line here man. :y:

I love the idea that the multis aren't forced but there are. I mean, it seems like there aren't but there are. So it sounded pro to me. I love swag man. So this piece is my cup of tea man. This for a keystyle is good man.

This line too man:
I feel like a parade of moods have barricaded my room


Very good. :y:
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Re: What its Come to- Keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Mar 31st, '11, 02:32

thanks for the feed, guy :y:
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