Books

[Innovation]

I liked the concept of this. I also really liked how you mentioned Adobe Reader to juxtapose books. I think you just need to improve on your rhyming as you have the ideas and structure.

[ArsheyHaq]

I pretty much agree with Innovation too.. If you learn to use better words to rhyme with, your raps will come off a lot more entertaining. Your ideas are fresshhh though keep 'em coming with your witty humor and original concepts

Also, for 10 minutes that was pretty awesome haha