It will be a lovesong...

[Erick]

Ahum...It's might sound a bit silly but I want to write a tacky love involving rap song. I just have to do it...For my girlfriend Carmelita. Yes...'Carmelita' see the problem? :worried:

So I was thinking to start of in the creative writing section, get constructive comments, language improvements and solid advice after which I will look for someone who will put a boomin' beat on it and for someone who is willing to be 'the voice' that raps the lyrics I wrote (accompanied by a female backingvocal(sample) of course).

It would mean so much to me if this could be realized. There is no hurry whatsoever of course! Think a project like this is possible on TRShady? I await your comments...(And words rhymin' on Carmelita...)

[ThomasAguanis]

it's def. possible here.
and can you pronounce the name for me cause i dont know how to pronounce it haha

[Erick]

It's like:
Carmelita, mammasita...
It's an italic/spanish name...So think of this when you say it...

[ThomasAguanis]

hmm
you could always say something like:
Carmelita, you're the heat ta ..

[Erick]

hmm
you could always say something like:
Carmelita, you're the heat ta ..

You have the right way to say it at least. But then...It will be on my mind the following months to come...I'll be posting a rough version soon!

[Erick]

:shifty: aint u gay

Carmelita is the name I gave my right hand...

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum

[ThomasAguanis]

we half way to a verse tom WE MAKING HISTRY ........

haha i'll add soem more..

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls

[ThomasAguanis]

hahahahahahahah
(may only be a english slang for you dick )

nope it's used here too.


carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth

[Erick]

when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis

Is this even remotely stimulating or even romantic? But then again...

[Erick]

il do it if you want

What do you mean with this? Be the voice? Or make a boomin' beat?

[Erick]

as corny as that is...

if my boyfriend did that for me, i'd love it

I am hoping for the same reaction from Carmelita...And I first thought it was corny too but isn't this far more appealing then the daily 'Al Bundy-in-front-of-the-television-pose' routine?

But with all suggested lyrics so far I'm afraid it'll be cold and lonely this christmas...

[Erick]

:giggle: sorry hun

Atilla the Hun?

[Erick]

:shocked2: eww u called him G!!! thats not his nick!!! say it!!!!

sorry to say this ang but she can say it.....

g_killa = 2 posible nicknames

g

killa

I like you enthousiasm! (also regarding the lyrical insomnia)

[Erick]

should you not be writing it anyway......i was mearly fucking about lol

You are right, I will write it, post it here, let whoever wants criticize and comment it and then the next step...Auditions!


But whenever you have a bright moment and think of a nice rhyme involving 'Carmelita' please don't hesitate to put it uphere! I'm scribblin' and scribblin'...

P.S. As I am actually far too busy to be on TRShady often as possible don't think I don't apreciate everyone posting something here when I am gone for a little while. This 'project' will be finished! But isn't the only project at hand...