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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 05:10

wo yo this shit here im lovin it
i can say nething and ya'll beleave the shit
every now and then im gonna drop somthing
see wat all u haters end up thinking
winde up and swing, batta boom batta bing
the underground lyrical king
cant afford shit not even half descent bling
cant rap fuk cant sing
on this site doesnt matter if u can or not
its like u haters have it all in a plot
do not, under estamate the underdog
like a frog, we'll leap right bak at you
have u st st studda steppin for half a clue
shit if ne of yall new a thugz motivation
you'd be feeling a bit of hesitation
fukin with us, ur fukin with a fully loaded bus
of mad crazed, eyez hazed, cystal meth put u to death
straight up mutha fuka's that wouldnt give to squirts a piss
wit brass knucks on there fists, ready to see u squeel 4 real
its the real deal, non of ya snitch or ur pure bitch

kk im ready lets here the comments on this one...im acturally really exctied to u wat u have to say about this one :)
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 21st, '06, 15:18

memyselforwho wrote:
Angie wrote:his also a blk kid from detroit :)



yeah, with internet and a computer right :zipped: :zipped: :zipped:



lmao, are u stereotyping?
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 21st, '06, 15:46

AspirinE wrote:
memyselforwho wrote:
Angie wrote:his also a blk kid from detroit :)



yeah, with internet and a computer right :zipped: :zipped: :zipped:



lmao, are u stereotyping?


was refering to black kid from detroite... nvm.. was a dumb joke..


The idiot didnt know he could be recognised by his IP the first twoo times he tried switching identities.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 21st, '06, 19:08

your like the girl that cried wolf...no one will ever take u serious.
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:04

excellent i enjoyed readin that keep em cummin :D
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:07

lmfao oh c'mon g_killa a prick i expect more from u
like ummm ur a fake u lil bitch blah blah blah yo next time u sumbit summtin be mean wit me ight
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 21st, '06, 22:08

ehhh :shakehead:
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:11

hmmmm u coulda did a lil better then that, but ummmm its good u kno no complaints but the fukin pizza here is shit like fuk talk about welfare pepperonies shit :p
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:13

lemme check hold up :smoking:
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:15

yayo it is :'( sad really
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:17

the fukin bitch gave me an unwanted rash so i fukin backhanded her and trhe baby choked and died on her passifier
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:19

if only i died her hair? :sweating:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 21st, '06, 22:21

seriously..
why do you bother to post
i mean it'd be ok if you posted decent rhymes but come on
don;t just ask people to make fun of you
you really must be extremly bored
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:22

awww g-killa my main man thats sweet of u puttin in that much time 4 me...maybe u shouldnt put so much time into it then maybe take it down to liek 3...4 seconds
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Postby Trigger » Apr 21st, '06, 22:24

heyyy :wave: i got nuttin to prove just talkin i honestly dont take ne thing serious im shur everyone on this site knos this by now
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