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A Rape Story (I found this on MySpace

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A Rape Story (I found this on MySpace

Postby Inzanity » Apr 29th, '06, 01:52

This story is sick and twisted and it will make u cry. I read it eariler in school and it disturbed me so much I can't bear to read it again. It was the most disturbin' thing I've ever read but u have to read it. If u have any love for innocent childen at all and if u are totally against grown men raping innocent children or men rapin' women then u will read this. I don't know if this story is true but pray to God that it isn't true.




Walking in my nighty; rubbing my eyes
My fathers sitting on the sofa with his friend
He pats the seat in the middle; i sit
Shivering so cold; a quilt he lends

"Jessy you love me dont you" a smile; his
Their breathe spirts weep
"Daddy you know i do; what is it?"
He smiles at his friend; his hand creeps

His friend takes my hand; looks me in the eyes
Daddys creeping up my nightie; cold hands
I try to pull his hand away; grip is strong!
They look at one another; nod; something planned

I feel my palms sweat; Daddys under my knickers
"Daddy im going to bed! Night" Pulling again
But there grip is to strong for weak me
I look at both; and ask, who are these men?

His fingers going up me; pulling away
His friend leans forward; a kiss? Why?
His toungue moving mine; my eyes squint
Lean back and away; "Why are you doing this?"

No answer, i feel the pain inside me; him
Chucks the quilt on the floor; me to
I try and scamper away, but im not fast
"O Daddy please, i love you"

His friend; pulling at my nightie
And my Dad pulling my pants down
His friend pinning my hands to the floor
As my Dad lies himself on the ground

I squirm; as Daddy friend pulls me up
And places me ontop of Daddy; thrusts within
I cry; i bite; i scratch; i slap; i fail
"O Daddy please you win you win!"

I can feel my skin rip; my virginity breaking free
I can feel the blood seep down my leg
"Daddy your hurting me please"
I plead to him and his friend; not even a beg

Daddys laughing; why does he laugh?
His friend shoves himself in my mouth and moans
Tieing my hands togather; moving in and out
"Ride me Jessy" He laughs and groans

They smile at one another; laugh to
They roll me over and spread me wide wel
My daddy sits on my face; himself in again
While his friend talks and pushes himself inside

I can hardly breathe; i gag for air
I cough and splutter; cry and weep
I beg and plead; but its no use
Theyve already made me hurt and bleed

I stare into his eyes; that look upon me
This is not my Dad; where is he?
If he was still here; would he care
Would he actually even; see?

Finally they get off and lie me on the sofa
My cheeks blouchy from tears and pain
They play with them selfs; all over me
Rub it in; making me feel the shame

"Why Daddy? Please tell me why?"
Dad looks at his friend; and waves him away
"Jessy i love you" he smiles and kisses my cheek
"Is that all you have in your heart to say?"

He puts my nightie on me
I walks me to my bedroom door
Ever since that night; His friend
And himself every Friday come back for more

"Night sweet Girl; You are my life"
Closing the door, tears still down my face
Still the smell of him and his friend
Fade into me like disgrace


I watch the Moon go down; the sun come up
"Jessy its school" Knocking at my door
I cant help but cry; weep in pain
Because im so scared he wanted more

But one night daddy took it too far
Daddy and his friend came back for one last shot

They were worried they would get caught
So he and his friend took me to a cemetary lot

I was blindfolded and my hands were tied back
"Daddy please!! Not tonight!"
Daddy and his friend both had their last fun
After that i tried to put up a fight

I begged daddy "Please no more!"
All he could say "Shut up you stupid whore!"
Daddy unblindfolded me at last
He said I love you so much

He went back into the car and pulled out a bat
"Daddy I swear I wont say a thing!!!!"
I was dead
After only one swing..........................
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Postby chronic » Apr 29th, '06, 01:59

wo... :'( :'( :'( :'( shit is sad..dam....if my dad ever tries himself on me :angry: kill his ass...anyway....he aint gai.lol...but..man..this shit is fucking sad...it aint no true story huh :( :( :( PLEASE TELL ME NO
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Postby Inzanity » Apr 29th, '06, 02:01

I don't know if it is but I pray that it isn't God I can't even read it again :'( :'( :'( :'(
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Postby chronic » Apr 29th, '06, 02:02

EmptyPromises wrote:I don't know if it is but I pray that it isn't God I can't even read it again :'( :'( :'( :'(


dam..man..seriosuly....this totally suck..its sooo sad...now..fuck..im gon have sad dreams...i jsut wanna totally kill the ass *daddy* and his friend.. :angry: :angry:
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Postby Inzanity » Apr 29th, '06, 02:05

chronic wrote:
EmptyPromises wrote:I don't know if it is but I pray that it isn't God I can't even read it again :'( :'( :'( :'(


dam..man..seriosuly....this totally suck..its sooo sad...now..fuck..im gon have sad dreams...i jsut wanna totally kill the ass *daddy* and his friend.. :angry: :angry:


I felt that too when I read it I was so angery and upset I started cryin' in the middle of class and every1 was lookin' at me I just wanted to fucking murder the dad and his friend
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Postby chronic » Apr 29th, '06, 02:08

EmptyPromises wrote:
chronic wrote:
EmptyPromises wrote:I don't know if it is but I pray that it isn't God I can't even read it again :'( :'( :'( :'(


dam..man..seriosuly....this totally suck..its sooo sad...now..fuck..im gon have sad dreams...i jsut wanna totally kill the ass *daddy* and his friend.. :angry: :angry:


I felt that too when I read it I was so angery and upset I started cryin' in the middle of class and every1 was lookin' at me I just wanted to fucking murder the dad and his friend


i didnt cried cuz im a man :shifty: but..i felt the same way as u..just wanted 2 kill these cowards..
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Postby MuNxMuN » Apr 29th, '06, 02:12

:loudcry: that's so sad....i would seriously be crying if hb wasn't IMing me :'(
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Postby me me » Apr 29th, '06, 02:51

fuck sad thats sick and wrong damn :angry: :angry: :angry:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Apr 29th, '06, 03:06

:'( omg...i rly hope this isnt true :( :loudcry: i almost started to tear up frum this.. i cant believe this..im jus praying its not true :(
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Postby icar » Apr 29th, '06, 10:04

yes this really is sad , hope this is not true
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Postby Ivy » Apr 29th, '06, 16:34

:loudcry: This is so sad, I didn't cry though, I was only paralyzed as I sat here reading word for word, line for line. I barely had enough strength to scroll the mouse down to read on and on. What a sick fuck, it's a shame, this happens everywhere, everyday, everyhour, in this world we call home. We're fighting for peace between each other, yet, we're not fighting for peace on our streets. People are so worried about terrorists and racial profile, yet they don't stop to look at the people they love, or what they may be hiding. :zipped:
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Postby Serenia » May 5th, '06, 15:45

:zipped: I red just a half...I just couldn`t go on! This sick madness can be so true... and this make me shivar... :'(
Hope some people will learn something from that...
And pray God that this cases disappear...! :angry:
Tell this people something they don`t know about HIM!
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 6th, '06, 02:54

:zipped: if this is made up... the sick fucker who thought of it should be drug in a feild and shot......

y? y did i read this? :'( now i got flashbacks pouring in my head..... this has disturbed old memories i was finally begining to let go........

this poem is a sad monstrosity........
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Postby polluted » May 6th, '06, 03:56

For some reason I can see that based on a true story though,


fuck, shit like happens every day...



author you ARE SICK FUCK
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Postby AspirinE » May 6th, '06, 11:43

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote::zipped: if this is made up... the sick fucker who thought of it should be drug in a feild and shot......

y? y did i read this? :'( now i got flashbacks pouring in my head..... this has disturbed old memories i was finally begining to let go........

this poem is a sad monstrosity........



...went to the car i was dead after only one swing


How on earth could this be true.

Do they practice logic in any of ya'll schools?
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