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I Cried Myself To Sleep Last Night

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I Cried Myself To Sleep Last Night

Postby Inzanity » May 12th, '06, 22:25

This is a poem I wrote eariler today at school I had finished my English test and I was bored plus I was feelin' a bit upset because I found out some things from my doctor yesterday and I decided to write a poem after the test just to pass the time and get my emotions out so I wrote this poem


I cried myself to sleep last night
Tryin' to fight pain thats too deep to fight

The Doctor told me sumthin' I didn't want to hear
and when she told me I felt my eyes start to tear

I woke up in pain this mourning, looked outside n rain was pourin'
and deep down inside my soul the pain was stormin'

In a matter of just 1 day my whole future vanished
I'll never become a nurse or join the army my whole life is damaged

The only thing I have left to consult in is the paper n pen
because lately the poems n songs seem to be my only friends

They listen to me when no1 else is willin' to
I close my eyes n think to myself Christina this is killin' u

I cried myself to sleep last night
tryin' to fight pain thats too deep to fight
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » May 12th, '06, 23:59

:( :'( wut happend :( :'(
Its legendary status sittin behind this computer wiigga
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Postby Infliction » May 13th, '06, 00:15

that was really good :'( :( What's the news?:( If you dont mind my asking
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Postby kait » May 17th, '06, 00:55

Aww. That's a really good poem. :hug: I hope you feel better.
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Postby sexymrsmathers » May 18th, '06, 00:36

hope u feel better
R.I.P Proof

we'll always love you
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Postby em16 » May 23rd, '06, 11:50

this is so sad to hear/read.. :'(

i hope that you'll soon be feeling better.. :D

but the poem was really good besides that..
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Postby woodbit » May 23rd, '06, 15:59

Good poem
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Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 24th, '06, 00:48

HOPE NUTTIN TOO BAD HAPPENED!! Pretty dope poem!
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Postby neha » May 24th, '06, 07:52

nice poem :'(
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