My Life

by **Virginia_Slim_50021** » May 16th, '06, 04:35

My Life's the same sad story like everyone else
Had a shitty childhood, life was a living hell
by the time I was five, my dad was in rehab
As an alienated youth, I had tons a reasons to be mad
I was a fat, tall, geeky lookin kid wit not a friend
Had enough of the shit, and I started to offend
Any one that ever did me wrong
I got em back in my first song
Shit was tight since I was only 12 when I recorded it
But I was too embarassed to tell anyone I could spit
Lost a bunch a weight and changed my attitude
Recorded my 2nd song, called it Hazardous Youth
Let my homies listen, and they was blown away
Couldn't believe that I could spit that way
We recorded a song together, called it snitches
But, we've still gotten alot of shit from some bitches
Some preppy ass losers who just like to mock us
But what they dont know is, they can't stop us
Livin in Iowa, ain't alot a rap fans
So i've recieved alot of reverse raceism first hand
But I'm a really nice person and i got a big heart
I'm not judgemental, even though I'm not to smart
My Life right now is probobly the best that its been
But I'm waitin for that day where I got all that money to spend

by **Inzanity** » May 16th, '06, 12:17

that was real dope shit man

by **polluted** » May 16th, '06, 13:55

weak...
standard bitch-snitch rhymes
no vocabulary
plain shit

by **Inzanity** » May 16th, '06, 22:46

polluted wrote:weak...
standard bitch-snitch rhymes
no vocabulary
plain shit

yo don't hate on him man I thought it was good it had a real good emotional feel to it thats wat writings about makin the people that are reading or listenin to ur shit feel wat ur feeling and givin' them somethin' to relate to. It's not about usin' big vocabulary words I mean it's not like this persons a professional or anything he's still underground. I don't know how long he's been rapin' but the longer he raps the better he'll get