(Rhyme) Shit Gettin Dangerous

[Infliction]

This was the second rhyme i wrote, but ive always liked it. Tell me what you think.
I was trying to make it sound like eminem on "40oz."


Sh*t Gettin Dangerous

(Intro Beat)

Yo these people messin wit and I dont think that they kno,
That I sport a .44 and I'd bust one in they ho' <(hole)
Bitches in the club, they be runnin right fo the dow'<(Door)
Better get out ma sight fo i blow off all yo' toes!! (Background: HAHA!)
And once we kicked out the club we roll out in the es-co-lade,
Bitches on the street say that he got it made
See them europeean lights fly off into the night, yo eyes is squintin' as we roll right outta sight..

(Chorus)
Shit gettin dangerous, now less ride
Shit gettin dangerous it aint right
Shit gettin dangerous, ready to fight
Shit gettin dangerous, all night


Fuckin wit me is like fuckin wit da po-po's,
Like it or not they on top, and you gon get popped
Most terrifyin crew alive that follow ma flow,
Dont believe this you tell me and ill get em to come show
Just ta make sure you muthafucka's know,
Not to fuck wit us cuz we fuck you rite back lot fuckin' mo'
Ma life is simple; you fuck around and I pop you like a pimple
Preppy bitch wit his smile, you see his dimple? Thass ma bullseye
Oh, iss pretty small better use ma eagle's eye...BANG....

(Chorus)

Cant stand these fuckin' people steppin on ma territory
Hate it when y'all cats is like "Yo homie can you share it wimmy?!"
THE FUCK DO YOU THINK? I WORKED FOR THIS SHIT I DONT JUSS GIVE IT AWAY!
Dumb mothafuckas, white bread, redneck, corn shuckas, farm boy, cant-afford-a-car-alarm-boy
Aha, to late, broken window, mine now, man, I really get ta shine now, iss ma time now,
I get to really ryme ma heart out now! No more underground shit from this point on,
Gotta hear ma shit on the radio while I get ma shine on, I wanna hear it line fo line, from time ta time
Wanna hit tha charts wit a bang, acceptin awards and thankin ma gang then headin to tha after party,
Fo a couple a drinks then there be a chick, who be dyin to suck on ma dick... Now you's a jealous fuckin prick...


(Chorus X3, last one change fight to die)

[Inzanity]

It was alright man I think it would go well with the 40 oz beat.

[Infliction]

thanks for the feedback.