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FORDIE & Sonik (Where it all began)

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FORDIE & Sonik (Where it all began)

Postby 4D » May 22nd, '06, 22:37

This is the first text rhyme i posted on the internet, and one of my first ever rhymes. I was just learning how to make it flow, but, still had a good grasp of multies.

Check out the rhyme and then check the link underneath, some vintage TrShady battle rhymes in there!! :D

I`ll open u like a tin of beans `
and gag u before u leak the screams.
Bleakest dreams no match for this reality
Battle me and fall victim to ur own calamity
No story is mo notorious than this fatality

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Link: http://www.forum.trshady.com//viewtopic ... highlight=

^That was actually the first battle rhyme ever posted on TrShady! :D
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Postby polluted » May 23rd, '06, 05:43

yo rhyme kinda sukcs))

what the fuck u posted that ASS in yo avatar
its ugly :tounge2:
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Postby $0 R3@L » May 23rd, '06, 16:01

polluted wrote:yo rhyme kinda sukcs))

what the fuck u posted that ASS in yo avatar
its ugly :tounge2:


yer that avatr is disgusting bruv....that ass is super ugly :confusion: :unsure:
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Postby Infliction » May 23rd, '06, 16:03

$0 R3@L wrote:
polluted wrote:yo rhyme kinda sukcs))

what the fuck u posted that ASS in yo avatar
its ugly :tounge2:


yer that avatr is disgusting bruv....that ass is super ugly :confusion: :unsure:



are.. are yall kiddin me?! that as is fuckin sick! id like to buff her floor :smoking:
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Postby $0 R3@L » May 23rd, '06, 16:07

its flab bruv :happy: ... i prefer firm ass but each man to themself :)
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Postby Virginia_Slim_50021 » May 24th, '06, 00:24

HAHAHAHAHAH! WAZZZZZUP BITCH? UR RHYMES are kinda weak. keep workin!!! I GOTTA TAKE A SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby polluted » May 24th, '06, 14:13

Virginia_Slim_50021 wrote:HAHAHAHAHAH! WAZZZZZUP BITCH? UR RHYMES are kinda weak. keep workin!!! I GOTTA TAKE A SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



wot? fucu outta here bicc, if TR makes u like taking a dump
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Postby polluted » May 24th, '06, 14:14

plaspp wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
polluted wrote:yo rhyme kinda sukcs))

what the fuck u posted that ASS in yo avatar
its ugly :tounge2:


yer that avatr is disgusting bruv....that ass is super ugly :confusion: :unsure:



are.. are yall kiddin me?! that as is fuckin sick! id like to buff her floor :smoking:



of course each to his taste, but wot a fuckin pig you gotta be if u like ass lyk dat, bruv? it;s fuckin make me puke...
good for Fordie he quit on it...
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