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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby BigBoss » Dec 9th, '11, 06:54

i loved everything, geno;s verse a bbit more cause it had a bit more multi's , flowed better, and was more of a "story"
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 9th, '11, 07:02

beat is monster

verses are on a high level, well written/ thought out

definitely good collab

steve's verse stuck out strong, i like the diving board part! :y:

geno, great rhyming skills
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 9th, '11, 07:13

beast mode with no cheat code :p
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Clarky » Dec 9th, '11, 18:36

Should record your stuff mate (not 100% if you do dont think i've seen anything tho), the rhymes are good enough, think you'll regret not recording earlier when you actually get round to doing it it's the hardest part more practice the better.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Clarky » Dec 9th, '11, 18:47

Geno wrote:Yeah, I don't yet. I need to get a mic ASAP and start practicing. I write everything with the intention of recording it later on. I'll get on that. :y:

Least you'll have a lot of material to practice with but would defo reccomend it :y:
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Sam. » Dec 9th, '11, 19:09

Good shit you guys, it’s nice to se someone whose an A.S Vet dropping by CW for a change.


Steve Spag:
I really liked your verse and the content wasn’t that over- exaggerating as the Title suggests that it should be, it’s dope either way though. The way you changed the Rhyme Scheme was really amazing, you also maintained the same Multi consistently over a good amount of Bars. At 1st I though that you were going to maintain the same Rhyme Scheme throughout the Verse, but you changed that eventually, which was great. I think that your verse was more synchronized to the beat than Geno; I guess that shows your experience. Few of the lines were a little corny but that’s okay and can be ignored. Good Job bruh. :b:

Genoz:
That’s some dope shit. Nice storytelling there and props in maintaining the concept of Rockstar throughout the verse. The detailing was very good. No criticism man, you nailed this very well, keep at it.

Overall this was a hot drop from both of you. Word.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Sam. » Dec 9th, '11, 20:09

Geno wrote:Thanks for the feed man. Don't know if you missed my flow (it's tough to get tbh) but I perfected it to the beat as well. I just went fast for the most part and it might be hard to pick up with your accent (assuming you have one if you live in India) :smoking:

I picked up the Flow man. No worries, papa's got a brand new bag of toys. As far as the doing justice to the beat is concerned, I liked Steve's approach more.You did a fare job too.

Don't worry about the accent thing, I know multiple accents + my original, so picking up flow is not a problem for me.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby SG. » Dec 9th, '11, 23:08

This was dope. Nice to see Steve Spag about. Strangely, I wasn't feeling you verse. I dunno what was wrong with it, because it was technically good.

Geno, yours was dope as always, and the flow perfectly fitted the beat. Get to buying that mic, son.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Mr.DGAF » Dec 10th, '11, 01:49

This is awesome guys, for real. Geno, you've got the crazy multis. That's always the case, and the flow is nailed to the beat. Awesome stuff from ya bruh, quite impressive all the way through.

Steve, never read anything from ya. But this was fire. I love how you organized your rhymes man, it flowed so naturally and easily. It was just really enjoyable to read, the content was executed properly and the rhymes were crazy.

Solid stuff from both of ya man, I'm really digging this.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 10th, '11, 04:32

Thanks for all the positive feedback guys, I had fun writing this one!
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Dec 10th, '11, 09:25

Well first off, shit's dope as always. Forgive me if my feed seems lacking lol. Your flows are serious, multis are there and the beat suits it nicely. Good job guys. :y: Also, I've never heard anything from ya Steve. Should I be prepared to be amazed? :D
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 10th, '11, 15:16

JamaicanPattlez wrote:Also, I've never heard anything from ya Steve. Should I be prepared to be amazed? :D

I don't post in this section anymore, I used to be one of the heavyweights a few years back but I've scaled back because I do Audio and a few people were jacking my lyrics without my consent when I posted in this section. Follow the links to check my official music!
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Sam. » Dec 10th, '11, 19:21

Steve Spag wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:Also, I've never heard anything from ya Steve. Should I be prepared to be amazed? :D

I don't post in this section anymore, I used to be one of the heavyweights a few years back but I've scaled back because I do Audio and a few people were jacking my lyrics without my consent when I posted in this section. Follow the links to check my official music!

Word man. Good thing SajN removed this Section from visibility to non-reg members.
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 10th, '11, 22:49

Sam. wrote:
Steve Spag wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:Also, I've never heard anything from ya Steve. Should I be prepared to be amazed? :D

I don't post in this section anymore, I used to be one of the heavyweights a few years back but I've scaled back because I do Audio and a few people were jacking my lyrics without my consent when I posted in this section. Follow the links to check my official music!

Word man. Good thing SajN removed this Section from visibility to non-reg members.

That's great news to hear, I wasn't aware!
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Re: Geno - Rockstar ft. Steve Spag

Postby Sam. » Dec 10th, '11, 22:54

He changed it last month after I pointed it out. :sweating: It's good though, Artistic work and effort will remain safe.
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