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Same shit, different day

Postby neha » May 26th, '06, 00:02

Its the same shit, but different day
I have nothing to do and nothing to say
Its like i am dead, but from inside
I dont care anymore about doing right

Ppl are telling me to enjoy life as much as i can
but they have no idea in what kind of shit i am
Cant stand seeing all those happy ppl around me
Why them and not me?

I know now for sure that i dont wanna live anymore
Why would I, what for?
You see, i suck at writing
I can see you at home laughing and crying


I just wrote this, but that just proves how bored i am, and you see how bad i am at writing....sorry if you had to read this poem
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Re: Same shit, different day

Postby Inzanity » May 26th, '06, 01:30

neha wrote:Its the same shit, but different day
I have nothing to do and nothing to say
Its like i am dead, but from inside
I dont care anymore about doing right

Ppl are telling me to enjoy life as much as i can
but they have no idea in what kind of shit i am
Cant stand seeing all those happy ppl around me
Why them and not me?

I know now for sure that i dont wanna live anymore
Why would I, what for?
You see, i suck at writing
I can see you at home laughing and crying


I just wrote this, but that just proves how bored i am, and you see how bad i am at writing....sorry if you had to read this poem


don't be so hard on urself it was a good rhyme. It takes time to become a really good writer all u gotta do is practice I mean every1 sucks the first few years that they start writin' I mean listen to some of Eminem's real old shit from when he was like 14 and 15 when he first started rappin' even he sucked then. Then he got better and now he sucks again LMAO but seriously u'll get better in time
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Postby sinemm » May 26th, '06, 12:08

heh no its not bad its even good i liked it :)
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Postby neha » May 26th, '06, 13:23

writing is not something i love to do, but maybe i'll try again when i am bored(i am always bored,so it wont take long)
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