27 bar celeberty diss 3 different rappers 9 bars each rapper

[Inzanity]

Dissin' Eminem 1st 9 bars, dissin' 50 Cent bars 10-18, dissin' DMX bars 19-27



btw throughout most of this I'm just jokin' so don't take the whole thing seriously I got really board durin' school and I wrote this for fun btw I was only serious about 50 I really don't like his music but I listen to Eminem and DMX alot well anyway I think it's kinda wack but let me know what u think


1) I'ma make this rhyme as wack as I want it,
I'll never leave rap bitch even when I die I'll come back just to haunt it,
and the only way a song is dope is if I'm on it,
the only difference between me and Shady is in order for his rhymes to be dope he has to be high off a drug like chronic,
me I don't have to be high for my shit to be dope and thats just bein' honest,

2) he said it himself "It's probably because of the drugs,
that Shady does what he does",

3) thats y The Marshall Mathers LP was his best record to date,
and every record before it was almost as great,

4) but thats only because he was doped up on cocaine, mushrooms and extacy,
mabey if Eminem went back to doin' drugs we would hear some good music on his next LP,

5) cause' he hasn't had a dope record since The Eminem Show,
I mean shit Encore wasn't exactally what I would even call a record but then again yo,

6) there was like 2 good songs on there but one was about his daughter and the other about the battle,
of course those are gonna be good but the rest of the songs on that record shouldn't even be considered rap though,

7) and Curtain Call I mean seriously the only new shit that should've been on that album was When I'm Gone,
cause' Shake That and FACK sucked he shouldn't have even did them songs

8) All I know is on this up and comin' D12 album I wanna hear some dope ass skills,
and The Re Up mixtape better be dope as well,
speakin' of Re Up Eminem better re up his skills,
cause' if his next album ain't dope as hell,

9) then he better put the mic down and walk off the stage so fuck Eminem,
his run is over and he needs to take his own advice and admit that it's at it's end


10) when it comes to 50 Cent don't even get me started,
wat is that crazy fuckin' faggit retarded,

11) the only good record he released was Get Rich or Die Tryin',
I mean seriously it was the only record worth buyin'

12) now all he does is commercial rap about nice cars, guns, and bitches,
I mean seriously what happened to the days when G-Unit used to run this shit kid

13) fuck 50 that bitch got lame,
thought he was untouchable and started dissing most of the hip-hop game

14) he dissed people who ain't did shit to him like Fat Joe and Jadakiss,
50 ain't nuttin' but a hater bitch,
and if he keeps fuckin' around he's gonna get shot and killed it won't be funny then cause' it'll be 50 see ya later bitch

15) We'll be walkin' around wit more Rest In Peace T-shirts
and right now I'm bein' serious 50 needs to cut the shit b4 he gets hurt

16) now I ain't really a fan of 50 Cent but I don't wanna see him in the same position as Tupac and Biggie,
I mean I could see the headlines now "Man Fires Two Shots at 50"

17) now I don't wanna see it happen but if it does it'll be his own fault
I would never wish death on nobody but I do wish all this beefing would be put to a hault

18) it seems like lately too many people are bein' shot dead
and I got a feelin' 50's gonna be next to get shot in the head


19) now lets talk about DMX he's always talkin' bout killin' people on his records but I ain't seen him kill any1 yet
I mean shit he ain't no gangsta he probably don't even own a semi I bet

20) he rarely raps about what he's been through, most of his songs are about how he's gon' shoot men dude

21) I wanna hear some real shit I wanna hear him droppin' skills
instead of alway talkin' bout' poppin' steal

22) if he's gonna talk about killin' people then I wanna see him go out and do it
cause' otherwise he's liein' in his music and I don't wanna listen to it

23) don't get me wrong his lyrics are ill,
expecally his songs about God he's got some spiritual skills

24) but I don't wanna hear no Gansta rap mixed with Christian rap
I mean seriously what the fuck forget that crap

25) how can he rap about blowin' a youngsta away
and then a few tracks later start to pray

26) talk about bein' hypocritical,
but fuck it DMX is a wanksta and his rhymes are typical

27) he ain't shit but a bitch,
and him, 50 and Slim just got hit wit a diss

[4D]

Change the font colour of the 3rd verse, it`s invisible. Nevermind, I highlighted it!


I dunno if it was intended, but, great multi "Tupac and Biggie / Two Shots at 50"!! You should try that more often. The rhyme itself is very good, it`s hard to say things like what you said and make it complex too, so don`t be hard on yourself, just keep up the good work.

I think all your content is pretty much on point, except there`s more than 2 good songs on Encore. But, i agree about the rest, Eminem wrote his most kick ass lyrics when under the influence. Conceptually speaking anyway, I can`t even imagine Eminem now writing a song as dark as Kim or Stan, which is a pity, because that`s what made me a fan! But, on the other hand, songs like "Mockingbird" and "Love You More" are great in the opposite way. Not conceptually, but, sincere and the latter still has a touch of that dark side.

50 is a complete plonker, he also dissed a legend like Nas, just to gain controversy for his album sales. He`s a money-grabbing wanker, I won`t even download his next album, unless he has a few interesting collabs!!


And as for DMX, he is highly respected for some reason, but, i don`t have any interest in his style of rap. Gangsta shit is boring now, that was great 15 years ago, time to move on!! i agree with ya on this!!

[4D]

DMX is dope.......end of ^^

In your opinion.

[AspirinE]

DMX is dope.......end of ^^

In your opinion.

DMX A good mix of lyricism and gansta rap.

[4D]

A Good mix of rapping and gangsta more like, cos i listened to "It`s dark and hell is hot", it`s noa at a level where you`d say lyricism. That would be Ice Cube or Wu Tang.

[4D]

Sounds like you need to check out a few Wu Tang albums as much as i need to check DMX!!

[Inzanity]

Change the font colour of the 3rd verse, it`s invisible. Nevermind, I highlighted it!


I dunno if it was intended, but, great multi "Tupac and Biggie / Two Shots at 50"!! You should try that more often. The rhyme itself is very good, it`s hard to say things like what you said and make it complex too, so don`t be hard on yourself, just keep up the good work.

I think all your content is pretty much on point, except there`s more than 2 good songs on Encore. But, i agree about the rest, Eminem wrote his most kick ass lyrics when under the influence. Conceptually speaking anyway, I can`t even imagine Eminem now writing a song as dark as Kim or Stan, which is a pity, because that`s what made me a fan! But, on the other hand, songs like "Mockingbird" and "Love You More" are great in the opposite way. Not conceptually, but, sincere and the latter still has a touch of that dark side.

50 is a complete plonker, he also dissed a legend like Nas, just to gain controversy for his album sales. He`s a money-grabbing wanker, I won`t even download his next album, unless he has a few interesting collabs!!


And as for DMX, he is highly respected for some reason, but, i don`t have any interest in his style of rap. Gangsta shit is boring now, that was great 15 years ago, time to move on!! i agree with ya on this!!

yea the "Tupac and Biggie/ Two shots at 50" was intended. Also I know Encore had alot more good songs as well but like I said I wasn't bein' serious throughout most of this. I just got board and wrote this just for fun. Also I think DMX is one of the best Emcee's out there. I ain't really into gansta rap all that much but I listen to DMX alot. The 9 bars dissin' DMX was the only 9 bars where I wasn't bein' serious at all. The only part on here where I was bein' really serious throughout the whole 9 bars was when I was talkin' about 50 I really don't like him. And on some parts in the 1st 9 bars where I'm dissin' Eminem I was also bein' serious but not throughout the whole thing.

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I can tell during the bars about EMinem that you mean a lot of it, because they`re things thast a lot of real fans think about! Especially the drugs thing, because I`m kinda on the same page there.

[AspirinE]

A Good mix of rapping and gangsta more like, cos i listened to "It`s dark and hell is hot", it`s noa at a level where you`d say lyricism. That would be Ice Cube or Wu Tang.

U just didnt get it yet. Wen i first heard DMX i dint like his songs. But he actually gets really deep into the lyrics in some songs. SOme of his songs are more like hype type.

[4D]

So, does it deserve "revision"?

[DOPE]

that was a good idea and nice rhymes

i agree with your on the Em shit in some parts that Encore was the worse of his albums ONLY in his own standard otherwise his album was much better than them other artists

i dont agree with you on that 50 shit tho he is makin some wack songs lately but he came up back with hot shit on that GEt Rich Or Die Tryin SOUNDTRACK songs like Hustlers Ambition When It Rains It Pours Things Change and etc

and i dont agree with DMX shit tho i dont like his shit much cuz his last album wasnt good, and his nu song "Lord Give Me A Sign" was not good comapring it to his own previous shit , he got the talent he aint using it right man he just screaming

[4D]

What you said about Eminem is 100%.

Haven`t checked out that GRODT soundtrack, might do now!

[4D]

there you go fordie, right again as usual!! Props!

Thanks man!!