something i'm working on....

[MuNxMuN]

[verse 1]
this is dedicated to someone i've known forever
from the moment we met i never thought we'd be together
our interests and personalities contrast like day and night
but somehow we seem always to get a long alright
i listen to rap music and you listen to rock
you believe in god and i don't believe in him at all
you grew up in vegas and i grew up in the bay
you like to hangout at the park and i like the arcade
you live with many sisters and i live with a brother
your parents are lenient and mine are stricter then others
you don't mind failing school but i'd flip if i did
while you've commited non i've comitted a few sins
when i talk about anime you have no clue what i'm on
when you talk about sports i try my best not to yawn
sometimes i'm surprised that we even get along
we have many differences but nothing in common at all

[chorus]
ever since you left my life hasn't been the same isn't the same
i'm missing you everyday and the pain never fades away
but everytime i hear your name and this may sound cliche
i miss you more and i hope you won't forget me




i wasn't gonna post it but i really need opinions before i continue working on the second verse.....personally i think the chorus sux but i'm not worried about that right now

[MuNxMuN]

thanks sarah and this is gonna be dedicated to one of my bestest friends that's going to be leaving me soon


i wanna show it to him before he leaves but at the rate i'm going it's not gonna happen....i'm probably just gonna send it to him over the summer

[MuNxMuN]

yea he's moving houses

[MuNxMuN]

yea we still can but it's not going to be the same and i doubt i'll be able to see him since he's moving to utah which is like a 4 hour drive away

[MuNxMuN]

you probably are trippin killa we kinda are close cause i've known him for a few years and we're almost always together

it's gonna be hard losing another best friend but it's happened to me before.....

[Lil Pimp Tell 'Em]

nice rhyme max



um..bye bye maxs bestest friend

[MuNxMuN]

:shocked: nice rhyme max



um..bye bye maxs bestest friend

what happened to max sux huh? thanks marker and my friend isn't on tr lmao..he doesn't even like rap music

[4D]

You should definitely finish this. Itt`s something i bet 95% of people can connect with. Sometimes people can be so different, with no common interests, yet, couldn`t imagine being with anybody else. Very Strong content, something I myself was thinking of writing about too!

FINISH IT!!

[MuNxMuN]

thanks fordie i'm gonna finish it.....i just hope it's not going to take a long time

[4D]

Yeah, i see you want to try and rush it and give it to him. You souldn`t do it at the expense of fuckin it up though. Either finish it until you`re content with it, or you could just give it as it is.

Shouldn`t rush it though

[MuNxMuN]

yea i want to get it done but it's hard for me to write stuff now i just don't want it to take months for me to write it it used to be a breeze for me to write stuff but now it's not and i blame it on my english teacher i'm gonna finish it before i give it to him and not just as it is right now cause i still have to audio and all that fun stuff -__-