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rough 1st verse on a track called revenge is sweet

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Postby rhiannon » Jun 6th, '06, 14:28

omg...idk wat 2 say..that was reall good an sad i realli like it....idk wat to say serious
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Postby stevethetruth » Jun 6th, '06, 14:36

not bad not bad at all
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Postby X-Ray » Jun 6th, '06, 16:14

not very many rhymes but ver intece i just dont know to what beat in my head i should read it but very nice
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jun 6th, '06, 20:38

read it while playing the beat and it seemed to fit fine
song should be great
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby Inzanity » Jun 7th, '06, 12:16

wow that was some deep shit I loved it
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Postby Inzanity » Jun 7th, '06, 18:15

g_killa wrote:yeah true story obv i wasnt around for none of it tho and thanks for the support ppl :flower:


dam thats a true story thats sad :(
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 7th, '06, 21:59

Shit is good....

you gotta lay that shit on Tape.
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