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How To Diss 101

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 3rd, '12, 01:09

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Ive seen some little disses here, more slaps than punches..so this is, How To Diss 101


Faggots postin writtens of posin disses, talkin about Spyders "caught in the web"
I swear you bitches oughta be dead for thinkin punches from years ago were hot in your head!!
See my direct shots are shockin when Im Raiden, Ima thunder god with lyrical wonder rods
No indirect plots..Boy, you take "Atone" with me, Ill put you 6 feet "Underdog"!!
Got this kid yellin "somebody save me quick!" cuz his bitten writtens cant phase me bitch
Im like Tarantino on percs, I got crazy scripts..but when "eye" wrote this it was "lazy shit"!!
Shout out to your eye lids..Believe me thats grave, just diss me, please be that brave
So I can serve ya bitch, merk ya quick and prove you cant even see me, halfway!!
If you wanna diss Spyder, go beyond nameplays, its useless, actually use some hits
Like how this hoe disgrace is so afraid to show his face, that he removed his pics!!
But hey, who am I to crucify a stupid guy that tried to put a twist on line I had in 2008
Saw my "web" bar, figured he spin it, call it finished put it in his disses and its bound to be great!!
But enough about this geek whose the toughest of the weak with a stomach fulla skeet
See Im gunnin for elite, make Spy pass the ring, fuck up class_theking..its nothin for a beast!!
Ive beaten the likes of J Roc, Slim Sox, Coleon, Boston..even handed Spyder a knockout
So these newer guys sewer rhymes are easily knocked down, laughed at and jocked now!!
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 3rd, '12, 02:45

DAMMMMMMNNNNNNNNN!!!! liked this a lot, very clever punches, very nice nothing to critisize really. way to go keep it up.
"Shady said it Shady meant it, I stay demented, Ill throw a stroller at you, with a baby in it"
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '12, 03:32

why :(

i drop one and three respond lol

im famous
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 3rd, '12, 07:43

I aint dissin you, dry your eyes..Im showin these lil kids how to send direct shots and not just subliminals and name flips..even though Im the king of name flips haha..its all good Spy, I got mad respect for ya bro

And thanks for the feed ShadyTillIDie, appreciate it
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby Fleka » Apr 3rd, '12, 10:59

Great verse Strict.



Since people do internet battles, lines like these should be used. But I`m not a rapper so they could use some remodeling.



I`m dissing you harder and when I`m done no one will respect you
And even your internet provider will be sure to dissconnect you

My rhymes will destroy you, not only provoke you
They`ll make your modem alive and the fucker will choke you


For all the wack-ass rap, we blame you dude
Even your IP adress is fucking ashamed of you
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '12, 22:30

haha ight fam
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby CrashBand » Apr 5th, '12, 04:41

Fleka wrote:Great verse Strict.



Since people do internet battles, lines like these should be used. But I`m not a rapper so they could use some remodeling.



I`m dissing you harder and when I`m done no one will respect you
And even your internet provider will be sure to dissconnect you

My rhymes will destroy you, not only provoke you
They`ll make your modem alive and the fucker will choke you


For all the wack-ass rap, we blame you dude
Even your IP adress is fucking ashamed of you


i'm going to beat you up
Your computer will come and EAT YOU UP ;)

Just playing though man, I see what you're saying lmao but I think that concept could maybe come off a little generic or corny (unless Possessed got hold of it) but more than anything I'd find it a bit hypocritical unless you were taking a shot at someone in real life who was a known internet rapper
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '12, 19:14

well damn, that wast a lil strict downt yah think/?
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Re: How To Diss 101

Postby kevinbacon » Apr 12th, '12, 08:05

nice information...i appreciated your effort..I would like to see more posts like this.thanks
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