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Fake Walk

Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 00:55

*Chorus*
Here in Big C, everybody thinks they G,
Walkin' around with their hood and their street vans,
They should go back to being who they should cause they all pance.
Plus we could tell your weak from our first glance.
Here in Big C, We gone make them all flee,
Walkin' around with all our glocks and all our armor,
There'll be so much blood on the blocks it becomes a harbor

So, you think you tough, well you ain't tough,
We can always read you, cause you can't bluff
You always try to down others by making up fake stuff.
Well that's it, we've had enough, snuff or smoke
puff some coke, but that doesn't make you hard.
We'll take you on, and your fake due gone.
and in relation to how much we placin
all these fake g's and their face in,
the ground, if you wanted to live you shouldn't have been around

*Chorus*
Here in Big C, everybody thinks they G,
Walkin' around with their hood and their street vans,
They should go back to being who they should cause they all pance.
Plus we could tell your weak from our first glance.
Here in Big C, We gone make them all flee,
Walkin' around with all our glocks and all our armor,
There'll be so much blood on the blocks it becomes a harbor

It's true my crew will have you fucked up so fuck you
and if your a schmuck too, then you gonna run amuck too.
We so quick you won't even know what struck you.
everybody will mock you, you and your fake g walk too.

We holla you back to otherside, we won't alllow for another ride,
so don't bother to slide, in cause we got you blocked out,
knocked out, and no one can have us talked out,
of our mission or goals, so make sure not to be dissin' or you'll fold.

*Chorus*
Here in Big C, everybody thinks they G,
Walkin' around with their hood and their street vans,
They should go back to being who they should cause they all pance.
Plus we could tell your weak from our first glance.
Here in Big C, We gone make them all flee,
Walkin' around with all our glocks and all our armor,
There'll be so much blood on the blocks it becomes a harbor


Just wrote this up at school cause i was bored..
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Postby Xray » Apr 5th, '07, 12:22

dats a weird order of chorus and shit but its gooddddd new style :smoking:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 15:10

^^ i dont really like to do what everyone does, i just see how it fits well and shit. and i thought this way was better so yea..
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 5th, '07, 15:58

not bad man I liked it :smoking:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:32

thanks

more feed please
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:49

its good, but the verses are really short.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '07, 22:52

i know i was real rushed to finish it... so i was just like whatever.. at first I was gonna make it a real long verse with no chorus but got too lazy and hard stuff to do.
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Postby Hadez » Apr 5th, '07, 22:54

^ i thought it was funny cuz the chorus is just as long as the verses were. :sweating:
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