what u think??

[lil_bayly]

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[James R.]

Damn, you don't like somebody lol. But yeah that was decent, had a nice flow to it, could have been better in some spots, but nothing major. The punches were pretty decent, not amazing, but good. Definitely got some skill. Nice multies, not amazingly complex but they flowed nicely and they hit.

[lil_bayly]

thanx man im almost done it and ill explain what its all about when im done then itll make sense, thanx tho im glad u felt it

[Flamez]

that good man had a nice flow good work

[lil_bayly]

here's some more of it feedback please

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[James R.]

Thankfully you stuck with the flow and you kept the same level of punches, the closer was kinda weak, but it was still decent. I think you could hit with something a little harder, but I dont know the situation lol. I like your flow, I'm not sure if all your stuff is the punchline type of thing, but this was pretty hot.

Do me a favor and check my two drops if you havent already

[lil_bayly]

Thankfully you stuck with the flow and you kept the same level of punches, the closer was kinda weak, but it was still decent. I think you could hit with something a little harder, but I dont know the situation lol. I like your flow, I'm not sure if all your stuff is the punchline type of thing, but this was pretty hot.

Do me a favor and check my two drops if you havent already

Thanx for that all feedback is appreciateed, its not done yet i have another 2 minutes to go so that wasnt the closer and like i said whe its done ill explain the situation and itll make sense for ya, thanx again

[lil_bayly]

*bump, more feedback please*

[shady_soul]

damn! it was good bru', really enjoyed readin' it....keep'em shits comin'
peace