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feelin ill (fast tempo)

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feelin ill (fast tempo)

Postby Ka0t1c » May 24th, '07, 17:46

I'm feelin really ill more than a lil bit
N its bringin me chills cuz I'm a villain
I Kill, steal n deal but still I will wit my skills
defeat my demons if my dream gets fulfilled so my scene is rebuilt
cuz my mind seeks full healin to find a peaceful realm
cuz it's like elm street im meetin
oh please come and help me sight my freedom from Hell
cuz I thought I was the King of the Hill, oh well
I'ma fight this lethal spell that's leavin myself thinkin unwell
even if my shell griefs from what else that's secret to be in good health
cuz i'm breathin until the bell rings then it tells
everybody my body is expelled cuz the problems I've held, bottled n sealed
don't follow me fellow n frown, cuz hollow I'm now
cuz you don't wanna call for a towel
once you encounter that valley of doubt
cuz you can't count on bowin right down
just know it, my challenge I've found
and I'm proud I'm about to lounge in the clouds
not drown in the crowd where all lights have gone out
cuz there's a life to allow... survive the virus n rebound
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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