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nightmares..

Postby Flamez » Jun 29th, '07, 18:03

one dark lonely night as i walked in the middle of the street
loud rain started pouring down hard on the concrete
my feet hurt so much that i couldn't keep on walking
i collapsed to the ground then suddenly heard someone talking
couldn't see who it was but it felt like someone was stalking
i couldn't keep my eyes open i felt like it was the end
i couldn't bend my arms or legs i thought this was all for pretend
but it was no dream i was in a living nightmare in despair
i wasn't aware that i couldn't feel no more breathing air
i became impair then i felt this bolt of lighting strike me
when i knew that i was in pain suffering deep inside me
suddenly my eyes open up and i hear a gunshot
when i spot that the bullet struck me right in the heart
my eyes open up once again and i'm drowning deep in water
when surprisingly my eyes open up and realize this was a slaughter
a slaughter of recurring dreams of my own death in different ways
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Re: nightmares..

Postby shady_aftermathzz » Jun 29th, '07, 19:19

nice one, keep it up bru
much respect
In the event of my Demise ---- Tupac

In the Event of My Demise
when my heart can beat no more
I Hope I Die For A Principle
or A Belief that I had Lived 4
I will die Before My Time
Because I feel the shadow's Depth
so much I wanted 2 accomplish
before I reached my Death
I have come 2 grips with the possibility
and wiped the last tear from My eyes
I Loved All who were Positive
In the event of my Demise





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Re: nightmares..

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 29th, '07, 19:27

good shit
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